Any given society has a certain amount of homeless population, and it is thought by some to help them out by giving money. I completely agree with this argument as I believe that giving money helps them to afford for an accommodation and come out of abject poverty.
Firstly, money is the only way for homeless people to get proper shelter. Being unaffordable to buy an house or to rent one is the main reason for people to live on streets, so donating some amount of money, either from what we have or the government has, enables them to save their earnings in a period of time and buy a new home. The billionaire Bill Gates, for instance, donated half his money to Europe’s homeless people, which later reduced the number of people living on roads significantly.
Secondly, money may help them to come out of abject poverty. Most of the homeless people live under extreme poverty since they are stuck in a vicious circle of earning that is far less in proportion to their bare minimal expenses, so giving some amount of money may help them to come out of that circle. In the Netherlands, the government pays 50 dollars a month of every homeless individual for one year, during which they can try to earn and save some. Thus, the money given to the poor people residing in open pubic spaces may reduce the insult they receive from their intense poverty and start to save money.
In conclusion, homeless people are present in every single society, and some believe in donating money as the best to way to help them. I, too, believe that donated money alone can take care off their expenses and makes them save their earnings to find an accommodation and escape poverty.
Any
given
society has a certain amount of
homeless
population, and it is
thought
by
some
to
help
them out by giving
money
. I completely
agree
with this argument as I believe that giving
money
helps
them to afford for an accommodation and
come
out of abject poverty.
Firstly
,
money
is the
only
way for
homeless
people
to
get
proper shelter. Being unaffordable to
buy
an
house
or to rent one is the main reason for
people
to
live
on streets,
so
donating
some
amount of
money
, either from what we have or the
government
has, enables them to
save
their earnings in a period of time and
buy
a new home. The billionaire Bill Gates,
for instance
, donated half his
money
to Europe’s
homeless
people
, which later
reduced
the number of
people
living on roads
significantly
.
Secondly
,
money
may
help
them to
come
out of abject
poverty
. Most of the
homeless
people
live
under extreme
poverty
since they
are stuck
in a vicious circle of earning
that is
far less in proportion to their bare minimal expenses,
so
giving
some
amount of
money
may
help
them to
come
out of that circle. In the Netherlands, the
government
pays 50 dollars a month of every
homeless
individual for one year, during which they can try to earn and
save
some
.
Thus
, the
money
given
to the poor
people
residing in open
pubic
spaces may
reduce
the insult they receive from their intense
poverty
and
start
to
save
money.
In conclusion
,
homeless
people
are present in every single society, and
some
believe in donating
money
as the best to way to
help
them. I, too, believe that donated
money
alone can take care off their expenses and
makes
them
save
their earnings to find an accommodation and escape
poverty
.
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