A section of society asserts that homeless people must be given financial help. In my opinion, I agree with this partially as a myopic solution because people without any shelter of their own should be encouraged for education or their skills should be enhanced to help them settle in long term.
To begin with, people who don't have any place to stay are very unfortunate and it is the duty of the community to extend their helping hand to make them available what they are deprived of. Any kind of financial help is always appreciated hence the near term needs are fulfilled. Clothes, food and shelter are the basic necessities of any human being for survival. For example, many charitable organisations raise money to help such people.
Nevertheless, from an enlightened standpoint, government and charitable organisations should also focus more on the strategic solution of this problem. They need to be provided with education and followed by other professional skills which will eventually make them self sufficient and not dependent on any kind of donations. For example, governments should open up training centres which would emphasise on building the relevant skills which the homeless people can learn. These training facilities should provide shelter, food and relevant training which will help these people overcome the fear and be confident that they can earn and will be respected in the society. Therefore, by the government's planning and execution of different schemes can help anybody to again earn for themselves and also gain respect.
In conclusion, to deal with this problem of the society where some people have no access to the house, creating a proper plan and right execution of such plans can reduce or remove the problem entirely from the society.
A section of
society
asserts that homeless
people
must
be
given
financial
help
. In my opinion, I
agree
with this
partially
as a myopic solution
because
people
without any shelter of their
own
should
be encouraged
for education or their
skills
should
be enhanced
to
help
them settle in long term.
To
begin
with,
people
who don't have any place to stay are
very
unfortunate and it is the duty of the community to extend their helping hand to
make
them available what they
are deprived
of. Any kind of financial
help
is always appreciated
hence
the near term needs
are fulfilled
. Clothes, food and shelter are the
basic necessities
of any human being for survival.
For example
,
many
charitable
organisations
raise money to
help
such
people
.
Nevertheless
, from an enlightened standpoint,
government
and charitable
organisations
should
also
focus more on the strategic solution of this problem. They need to
be provided
with education and followed by other professional
skills
which will
eventually
make
them
self sufficient
and not dependent on any kind of donations.
For example
,
governments
should open up training
centres
which would
emphasise
on building the relevant
skills
which the homeless
people
can learn. These training facilities should provide shelter, food and relevant training which will
help
these
people
overcome the fear and be confident that they can earn and will
be respected
in the
society
.
Therefore
, by the
government
's planning and execution of
different
schemes can
help
anybody to again earn for themselves and
also
gain respect.
In conclusion
, to deal with this problem of the
society
where
some
people
have no access to the
house
, creating a proper plan and right execution of such plans can
reduce
or remove the problem
entirely
from the
society
.
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