There is no doubt that talent and hard work go hand in hand. While some people believe that certain individuals possess in born art in something or the other, Others argue that anyone can learn and accomplish to be an athlete or anyone he wants to be. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and will present my view.
One of the most significant advantages of the gifted person is that he makes things look easy when done by him. It is because he puts his soul and heart in it. For example, an artist can work on a single painting for weeks, the reason behind this is, he has the clarity what he wants and what will be his end product look like. In other words, we can always correlate perfectly with talent as they won't stop until they achieve what they want. As a result, Talented people achieve a different status in our society.
However, any talent is a waste if it is not supported by hard work and dedication. No one can achieve heights just on mere talent. For instance, Michael Philip was born with the skill of speed when swimming, but it was his continuous efforts that made him what he is today and establishing himself as one of the greats. Evidently, no one factor can contribute to someone's attribute, it is a sheer combination of a number of factors.
To sum up, Despite people arguing and giving importance to the talent above all. In my view, the talent is something that pushes you toward something, but it individuals' dedication and love for that career that takes him places.
There is no doubt that
talent
and
hard
work go hand in hand. While
some
people
believe that certain individuals possess in born art in something or the other, Others argue that anyone can learn and accomplish to be an athlete or anyone he wants to be. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and will present my view.
One of the most significant advantages of the gifted person is that he
makes
things look easy when done by him. It is
because
he puts his soul and heart in it.
For example
, an artist can work on a single painting for weeks, the reason behind this is, he has the clarity what he wants and what will be his
end
product look like.
In other words
, we can always correlate
perfectly
with
talent
as they won't
stop
until they achieve what they want.
As a result
, Talented
people
achieve a
different
status in our society.
However
, any
talent
is a waste if it is not supported by
hard
work and dedication. No one can achieve heights
just
on mere
talent
.
For instance
, Michael Philip
was born
with the
skill
of speed when swimming,
but
it was his continuous efforts that made him what he is
today
and establishing himself as one of the greats.
Evidently
, no one factor can contribute to someone's attribute, it is a sheer combination of a number of factors.
To sum up, Despite
people
arguing and giving importance to the
talent
above all
. In my view, the
talent
is something that pushes you toward something,
but
it individuals
' dedication and
love
for that career that takes him places.
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