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Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper? v.2

Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper? v. 2
Many people struggle to find out the facts from the news as it provides different versions of truth, almost similar in nature but leads to confusion. In order to avoid such chaos in analyzing the information, people believe that news should be objective and possibly exhibit only one interpretation. I believe that not all news is true and facts are distorted. Analysis of news becomes tricky if more than one variant exists and it is very difficult to endorse the correct one. Generally it is seen that news channel produces news but with slight changes and subjective in nature. As a result, people make different interpretation out of it and never agree on the facts. For instance, simmering controversy regarding Russia interference in US election, every news channel is covering the same news but some shows that Mr. Donald trump had personally mat with Russian lawmaker while other shows that his son mat with Russian team. Both news focuses on the election meddling but little deviation completely change the facts. Owing to such kinds of meddling with information, it can be referred that all news published newspaper is not true. There are different reasons behind this. One of the main reasons is the influence of political party on publishing. Another important reason is to get the popularity in the market to be number one newspaper. However, people expect that newspaper should only provide the truth but also make the interpretation clear so that people only understand the one fact. Furthermore, newspaper should not publish the information focusing on fringe facts which results in change the focus from main news. For example, Bollywood actor Sanjay dutt was caught in drug case, though media shows the drug case but also added to be released film. To conclude, there are numerous instance can be found where newspaper exhibit more variants of news and try to conceal the facts. News published in newspaper should must have objectivity for avoiding the confusions.
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struggle to find out the facts from the
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as it provides
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different
versions of truth, almost similar in nature
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believe that
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should be objective and
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exhibit
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is true and facts
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becomes tricky if more than one variant exists and it is
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difficult to endorse the correct one.
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it is
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that
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channel produces
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news
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but
with slight
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changes
and subjective in nature.
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different
interpretation out of it and never
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on the facts.
For instance
, simmering controversy regarding Russia interference in US election, every
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channel is covering the same
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news
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mat with Russian lawmaker while other
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that his son mat with Russian team. Both
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focuses on the election meddling
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deviation completely
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change
the facts.

Owing to such kinds of meddling with information, it can
be referred
that all
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news
published
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newspaper
is not true. There are
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different
reasons behind this. One of the main reasons is the influence of political party on publishing. Another
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important
reason is to
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get
the popularity in the market to be number one
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newspaper
.
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,
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people
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that
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should
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only
provide the truth
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also
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the interpretation
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that
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,
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should not publish the information focusing on fringe facts which results in
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change
the focus from main
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news
.
For example
, Bollywood actor Sanjay
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dutt
was caught
in drug case, though media
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shows
the drug case
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also
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added
to
be released
film.

To conclude
, there are numerous
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can
be found
where
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newspaper
exhibit more variants of
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news
and try to conceal the facts.
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published in
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newspaper
should
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must
have objectivity for avoiding the confusions.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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