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Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper? v.1

Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper? v. 1
Each class has some disrespectful students who create significant disturbances in the decorum of the class. Many argue, and I fully agree with them that such mischievous students should get separate classes because they can influence others with their bad attitude, and would affect their education standards by wasting the time of the class. It has been observed, that the pupils who are not seriously committed to their studies would not behave properly in the classroom. In other words, they would tend to whistle-around and disobey their teachers. Moreover, their carefree attitude would influence many others to join them and enjoy the time rather than focusing on their studies. The children are gullible, and can easily be influenced by the bad company. For instance, I have seen in my educational career that one such obstinate and rebellious student used to influence many others to make a whole gang over a very short time. Another issue with teaching them with others is that teachers have to spend a significant time of the class disciplining such students. The teacher's time is extremely precious, which he or she would utilize explaining the vital concepts of the lesson. Furthermore, their irresponsible attitude would also affect the focus of studious children leading to poor understanding and further wastage of time. This would result in the deterioration of the overall teaching standards of the class. To conclude, I firmly believe that such disobedient pupils should be separately taught to prevent the waste of time and their influence over others. It is further recommended that focus should be on their rehabilitation so that they could become a productive part of society
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has
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disrespectful
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students
who create significant disturbances in the decorum of the
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class
.
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argue, and I
fully
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agree
with them that such mischievous
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students
should
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get
separate
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classes
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because
they can
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influence
others with their
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bad
attitude, and would affect their education standards by wasting the
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time
of the
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class
.

It has
been observed
, that the pupils who are not
seriously
committed to their studies would not behave
properly
in the classroom. In
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other
words, they would tend to whistle-around and disobey their teachers.
Moreover
, their carefree attitude would
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influence
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many
others to
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join
them and enjoy the
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time
rather
than focusing on their studies. The children are gullible, and can
easily
be influenced
by the
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bad
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company
.
For instance
, I have
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seen
in my educational career that one such obstinate and rebellious
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student
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used
to
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influence
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many
others to
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make
a whole gang over a
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very
short time.

Another issue with teaching them with others is that teachers
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have to
spend a significant
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time
of the
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class
disciplining such
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students
. The teacher's
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time
is
extremely
precious, which he or she would utilize explaining the vital concepts of the lesson.
Furthermore
, their irresponsible attitude would
also
affect the focus of studious children leading to poor understanding and
further
wastage of
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time
. This would result in the deterioration of the
overall
teaching standards of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.

To conclude
, I
firmly
believe that such disobedient pupils should be
separately
taught to
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prevent
the waste of
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time
and their
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influence
over others. It is
further
recommended that focus should be on their rehabilitation
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so
that they could become a productive part of
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society
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true? What is the function of newspaper? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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