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Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper? v.2

Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper? v. 2
In modern life, news play a vital part in keeping people updated with all things that happened in every aspect of life. Considering that fact, most people demand that all news should be delivered objectively rather than subjectively. In this essay, I will give my perspective on news as well as functions of newspaper. First of all, I believe that news is not necessarily true and it is its audience duty to whether believe in what they heard or not. Technology has become increasingly popular in today’s world, which notably affects the way we do to stay updated and online news is one of the most convenient way to receive news. Notwithstanding its convenience, they have almost no restriction on posting and hard to validate when people come across them on the Internet. Even many national anchors do have biases in their statements on national TV news. To that end, they could possibly please their audience or viewers. To give an illustration, some renowned TV channels did take quotes or other information out of context and with their added subjective opinions, they falsely claimed individuals, corporations or even politicians on things they have never said or done. As a result, people should pay more attention on their sources for news. Furthermore, newspaper is a great way for people to receive information. It is acknowledged as one of the most useful means of providing informative news to keep people updated. For instance, in light of newspaper, I can get access to news in numerous number of fields that I am interested in. Moreover, newspaper is supposed to be more reliable than its counterpart. While online news sources have tons of fake news, information in newspaper was carefully analysed and validated before being printed. Although it has some disadvantages such as inconvenience, people should consider them as one of their information sources for news. All things considered, I would like to say that despite the fact that the authors and anchors do have their own perspective, they need to step out of their desired viewpoints in order to provide people information in their most objective way possible.
In modern life,
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news
play a vital part in keeping
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people
updated with all things that happened in every aspect of life. Considering that fact, most
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people
demand that all
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news
should
be delivered
objectively
rather
than
subjectively
. In this essay, I will give my perspective on
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news
as well
as functions of newspaper.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I believe that
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news
is not
necessarily
true and it is its audience duty to whether believe in what they heard or not. Technology has become
increasingly
popular in
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today
’s world, which
notably
affects the way we do to stay updated and online
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news
is one of the most convenient
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way
to receive
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news
. Notwithstanding its convenience, they have almost no restriction on posting and
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hard
to validate when
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people
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come
across them on the Internet. Even
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many
national anchors do have biases in their statements on national TV
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news
. To that
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end
, they could
possibly
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please
their audience or viewers. To give an illustration,
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some
renowned TV channels did take quotes or other
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information
out of context and with their
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added
subjective opinions, they
falsely
claimed individuals, corporations or even politicians on things they have never said or done.
As a result
,
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people
should pay more attention on their sources for news.

Furthermore
,
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newspaper
is a great way for
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people
to receive
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information
. It
is acknowledged
as one of the most useful means of providing informative
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news
to
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keep
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people
updated.
For instance
, in light of
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newspaper
, I can
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get
access to
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news
in numerous number of fields that I
am interested
in.
Moreover
,
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newspaper
is supposed
to be more reliable than its counterpart. While online
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news
sources have tons of fake
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news
,
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information
in
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newspaper
was
carefully
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analysed
and validated
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before
being printed
. Although it has
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some
disadvantages such as inconvenience,
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people
should consider them as one of their
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information
sources for news.

All things considered, I would like to say that despite the fact that the authors and anchors do have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
perspective, they need to step out of their desired viewpoints in order to provide
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people
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information
in their most objective way possible.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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