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Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper? v.1

Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper? v. 1
Most of us believe that truth should be unbiased and not stated from a point of view. In my opinion, it is hard to believe any news to be true these days due to several reasons. Although it is the responsibility of the newspapers to spread the truth and update the readers, they fail to do so. There are a number of reasons not to believe the news and here are a few of them. Firstly, news agencies these days are mostly owned by political figures and/or their connections. This influences the truthfulness of the news published by them. Such news will mostly be biased and favouring the ownership which means the chances that the facts are twisted is very high. Additionally, some newspapers are found to whip up gossip and false facts so as to improve their sales and increase the competition. Newspapers are one of the key ways in which news is spread amongst the masses. For most of us, our daily ritual begins with reading news and updating ourselves with the current events of the world. What we read influences the way we think and the decisions we make. Most of the people do not have the time and patience to analyse if what they read is true or not and end up believing them to be true and several decisions are made based on them. In conclusion, the utmost priority of newspaper companies should be to publish the truth rather than providing twisted and biased point of views as they are influencing hundreds of peoples.
Most of us believe that truth should
be unbiased
and not stated from a point of view. In my opinion, it is
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hard
to believe any
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news
to be true these days due to several reasons. Although it is the responsibility of the newspapers to spread the truth and update the readers, they fail to do
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so
.

There are a number of reasons not to believe the
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news
and here are a few of them.
Firstly
,
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news
agencies these days are
mostly
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owned
by political figures and/or their connections. This influences the truthfulness of the
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news
published by them. Such
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news
will
mostly
be biased
and
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favouring
the ownership which means the chances that the facts
are twisted
is
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very
high.
Additionally
,
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some
newspapers
are found
to whip up gossip and false facts
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so as to
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improve
their sales and increase the competition.

Newspapers are one of the key ways in which
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news
is spread
amongst the masses. For most of us, our daily ritual
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begins
with reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
and updating ourselves with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
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events
of the world. What we read influences the way we
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think
and the decisions we
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make
. Most of the
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people
do not have the time and patience to
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analyse
if what they read is true or not and
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end
up believing them to be true and several decisions
are made
based on them.

In conclusion
, the utmost priority of newspaper
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companies
should be to publish the truth
rather
than providing twisted and biased point of views as they are influencing hundreds of peoples.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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