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Most people prefer ready to eat food rather than homemade food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages. v.1

Most people prefer ready to eat food rather than homemade food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages. v. 1
Technology has drastically changed, an individual's preference. Presently many people have started to prefer ready eat food than homemade food. This preference has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay will argue how the drawbacks are overcoming the benefits. Ready to eat food is, food available in the packet form and requires minimum preparation time. It is convenient to get the ready eat food from the market and eat it, rather than bringing all raw materials and then cook it, like in case of homemade food. Ready to eat food is a good option for the students and persons who are living alone and far from their family. Another plus point of this ready food is time saving. People who are working hard and not getting sufficient time to cook, can easily fulfil their energy supply by ready food. So this kind of food has its own benefits in todays' fast running life. Although container food comes with so many benefits, there are drawbacks which are noticeable. One disadvantage of eating the packed food is health issues. As this food is prepared and packed for a long time, so many chemicals are used as preservatives and somewhere it is also lacking nutrients. Like many times we heard in the news that some packed food was contaminated as well as not up to the standard. This causes many health complications in a long term. Another negative point is, this ready food makes people lazy. If prepared food is available so easily, who will prefer to invest his energy in cooking? Like according to Harward university's research, 70% youth eats ready food in spite of homemade and this habit leading to them towards obesity. Every coin has its pros and cons, so the ready food has the same. I think disadvantages of the packed food are more alarming than the advantages as people are getting unhealthy and lazy.
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changed
, an individual's preference.
Presently
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many
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people
have
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started
to prefer
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ready
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eat
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food
than homemade
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food
. This preference has its
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own
advantages and disadvantages. This essay will argue how the drawbacks are overcoming the benefits.

Ready to
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eat
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food
is,
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food
available in the packet form and requires minimum preparation
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time
. It is convenient to
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get
the
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ready
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eat
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food
from the market and
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eat
it,
rather
than bringing all raw materials and then cook it, like in case of homemade
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food
.
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Ready
to
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eat
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food
is a
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good
option for the students and persons who are living alone and far from their family. Another plus point of this
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ready
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food
is
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time
saving.
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People
who are working
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hard
and not getting sufficient
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time
to cook, can
easily
fulfil their energy supply by
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ready
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food
.
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So
this kind of
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food
has its
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own
benefits in
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todays
'
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fast
running life.

Although container
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food
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comes
with
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so
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many
benefits, there are drawbacks which are noticeable. One disadvantage of eating the
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packed
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food
is health issues. As this
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food
is prepared
and
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packed
for a long
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time
,
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so
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many
chemicals are
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used
as preservatives and somewhere it is
also
lacking nutrients. Like
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many
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times
we heard in the news that
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some
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packed
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food
was contaminated
as well
as not up to the standard. This causes
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many
health complications in a long term. Another
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negative
point is, this
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ready
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food
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makes
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people
lazy. If prepared
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food
is available
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so
easily
, who will prefer to invest his energy in cooking? Like according to
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Harward
university's research, 70% youth
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eats
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ready
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food
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in spite of
homemade and this habit leading to them towards obesity.

Every coin has its pros and cons,
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so
the
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ready
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food
has the same. I
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think
disadvantages of the
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packed
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food
are more alarming than the advantages as
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people
are getting unhealthy and lazy.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Most people prefer ready to eat food rather than homemade food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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