It is argued that our lives were more fulfilling when the technology was less advanced. This essay disagrees with this statement and believes that computers and the internet have made life better. The essay will first discuss how smartphones save us time and then talk about how the internet has improved education, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
New phones, such as the iPhone, make our daily lives much less laborious and give us more free time. Jobs that required lots of energy and time can now be done at the touch of a button. For example, if we wanted to communicate with one another in the past, we had to write a letter, take it to the post office and then wait for it to be delivered, whereas these days we can simply tap the email icon on our touch screen and send a message in seconds.
The internet has also enriched our lives by providing us with more information than we could ever need, thus making us more independent and effective learners. In the past students had to rely on a teacher or physical books for their education and these were often either unavailable or in a format that most people did not want, but now we can pick and choose what we want to learn. For example, there are now thousands of free online courses available on YouTube that anyone can watch and learn from anywhere in the world.
In conclusion, life has been improved by technological advancements, particularly labour saving devices like phones and learning opportunities provided by the internet. 
It  
is argued
 that our  
lives
 were more fulfilling when the technology was less advanced. This essay disagrees with this statement and believes that computers and the internet have made life better. The essay will  
first
 discuss how smartphones save us time and then talk about how the internet has  
improved
 education, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
New phones, such as the iPhone,  
make
 our daily  
lives
 much less laborious and give us more free time. Jobs that required lots of energy and time can  
now
  be done
 at the touch of a button.  
For example
, if we wanted to communicate with one another in the past, we had to write a letter, take it to the post office and then wait for it to  
be delivered
, whereas these days we can  
simply
 tap the email icon on our touch screen and  
send
 a message in seconds.
The internet has  
also
 enriched our  
lives
 by providing us with more information than we could ever need,  
thus
 making us more independent and effective learners. In the past students had to rely on a teacher or physical books for their education and these were  
often
 either unavailable or in a format that most  
people
 did not want,  
but
  now
 we can pick and choose what we want to learn.  
For example
, there are  
now
 thousands of free online courses available on YouTube that anyone can  
watch
 and learn from anywhere in the world. 
In conclusion
, life has been  
improved
 by technological advancements,  
particularly
  labour saving
 devices like phones and learning opportunities provided by the internet.