Recently, there are so many events or festivals around the world. While some people participate in them after understanding their interpretation, others are just delighted without comprehension. I think that people are forgetful the meaning and focus on pleasure.
There are certainly some festivals which excite after understanding explanation. For instance, people celebrate Setsubun which is a festival of Japan and means division of the season. People throw soybeans for inviting good luck and driving out bad luck at home. This event’s meaning is known by everyone from children to adults because most people experienced it at the kindergarten. But some events which came to Japan recently have forgotten the meaning.
Some religious and traditional events have become things for pleasure. In Japan, for example, Japanese have celebrated Halloween lately. Most people know disguising but do not know why to celebrate. Therefore, young people disguise themselves as cartoon characters, doctor or police and make the noise at downtown. In addition, there is some problem such as making the town dirt or breaking things in the town. Moreover, they celebrate Christmas, but they just spend time with friends, family or a lover and do not go to a church. They exchange presents and eat a cake. In case of Japan, people tend to admire foreign events and research them on the website. At that time, they placed emphasis not on definition but on acting. Thus, the enjoyment is their primary goal.
In conclusion, although people enjoy festivals after understanding definition, I believe that most people enjoy without understanding it. They have to celebrate after interpreting events’ sense.
Recently, there are
so
many
events
or
festivals
around the world. While
some
people
participate in them after
understanding
their interpretation, others are
just
delighted without comprehension. I
think
that
people
are forgetful the meaning and focus on pleasure.
There are
certainly
some
festivals
which excite after
understanding
explanation.
For instance
,
people
celebrate
Setsubun
which is a
festival
of
Japan
and means division of the season.
People
throw soybeans for inviting
good
luck and driving out
bad
luck at home. This
event’s
meaning
is known
by everyone from children to adults
because
most
people
experienced it at the kindergarten.
But
some
events
which came to
Japan
recently have forgotten the meaning.
Some
religious and traditional
events
have become things for pleasure. In
Japan
,
for example
, Japanese have celebrated Halloween lately. Most
people
know disguising
but
do not know why to
celebrate
.
Therefore
, young
people
disguise themselves as cartoon characters, doctor or police and
make
the noise at downtown.
In addition
, there is
some
problem such as making the town dirt or breaking things in the town.
Moreover
, they
celebrate
Christmas,
but
they
just
spend time with friends, family or a lover and do not go to a church. They exchange presents and eat a cake. In case of
Japan
,
people
tend to admire foreign
events
and research them on the website. At that time, they placed emphasis not on definition
but
on acting.
Thus
, the enjoyment is their primary goal.
In conclusion
, although
people
enjoy
festivals
after
understanding
definition, I believe that most
people
enjoy without
understanding
it. They
have to
celebrate
after interpreting
events’
sense.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes