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Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food? v.4

Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food? v. 4
Food is the basic necessity of life. It lends a helping hand in complete growth and development of individuals. Nowadays people prefer to purchase a packed food rather than to cook. There are numerous factors which are behind the shop of food items. According to my perception, a cost is not sole factor responsible for the sales of food. This essay will scrutinize the other crucial aspects when people go shopping. At the outset of this new millennium, a plenty of people has a hectic schedule which does not leave sufficient time for them to eat homemade food. Thus, they buy frozen and packed food to save time. However, there are others who have a joint family, so, they have to consider their finances too which leads in purchasing of cheap as well as a huge quantity of food. On the flip side, whether the food is vegetarian or non-vegetarian also assists in the trading of food. In addition, modern generation is also worried about the quality along with the taste of food items. Such populace favors the renowned brands in a market instead of non-branded materials. Not just this, a few communities are very diet conscious, they lay the stress on each component of food so that they can eat a proper nutritional diet. Apart from this, In my country, the most indispensable aspect is the freshness of food which surged the sales of the product. Mulling over the topic, Although cost is the significant feature behind the marketing of the eatables still, there are a plethora of characteristics which influence the selling of food products.
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Food
is the basic necessity of life. It lends a helping hand in complete growth and development of individuals. Nowadays
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
a packed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
rather
than to cook. There are numerous factors which are behind the shop of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
items. According to my perception, a cost is not sole factor responsible for the sales of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. This essay will scrutinize the other crucial aspects when
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
go shopping.

At the outset of this new millennium, a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
has a hectic schedule which does not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
sufficient time for them to eat homemade
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
Thus
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
frozen and packed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
to save time.
However
, there are others who have a joint family,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
consider their finances too which leads in purchasing of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
as well
as a huge quantity of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. On the flip side, whether the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is vegetarian or non-vegetarian
also
assists in the trading of food.

In addition
, modern generation is
also
worried about the quality along with the taste of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
items. Such populace favors the renowned brands in a market
instead
of non-branded materials. Not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
this, a few communities are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
diet conscious, they lay the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
on each component of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they can eat a proper nutritional diet. Apart from this, In my country, the most indispensable aspect is the freshness of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
which surged the sales of the product.

Mulling over the topic, Although cost is the significant feature behind the marketing of the eatables
still
, there are a plethora of characteristics which influence the selling of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
products.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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