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Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. v. 2
The need for international cooperation to resolve urgent problems is debatable. Almost all urgent problems can be resolved with international cooperation. This essay will talk about the need for international cooperation in order to resolve urgent problems. International cooperation is efficient in resolving urgent problems. Countries with low problem solving skills can depend on first world countries for help. Advanced countries always have an upper hand in resolving problems, rather than one country working on its own. For example, the United Kingdom was able to help Lebanon in resolving its civil war in the year 1987, and it also ended the civil war in Lebanon. The cooperation between the two countries in resolving an urgent issue is more efficient than one country working on its own. In addition, the cooperation between two world countries is time saving. If two world countries come together, it would take less time than one country trying to resolve the problem on its own. Furthermore, both country's resources combined to combat the problem would take less time than one country working on its own. For example, during world war one, the cooperation of multiple countries in an effort to end the war lead to the end of world war one in less than a year. Working together as two countries or more always take less time than one country try to resolve a problem on its own. In conclusion, the effort and time spent on resolving a problem by two or more countries are far more superior than one country trying to resolve an urgent problem on its own. International cooperation can be efficient, while it also can be time saving when it comes to urgent problems.
The need for
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international
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cooperation
to
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resolve
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urgent
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problems
is debatable. Almost all
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urgent
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problems
can
be resolved
with
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international
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cooperation
. This essay will talk about the need for
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international
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cooperation
in order to
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resolve
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urgent
problems.

International
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cooperation
is efficient in
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resolving
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urgent
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problems
.
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Countries
with low
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problem
solving
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skills
can depend on
first
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world
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countries
for
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help
. Advanced
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countries
always have an upper hand in
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resolving
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problems
,
rather
than one
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country
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working
on its
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own
.
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, the United Kingdom was able to
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help
Lebanon in
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resolving
its civil
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war
in the year 1987, and it
also
ended the civil
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war
in Lebanon. The
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cooperation
between the two
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countries
in
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resolving
an
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urgent
issue is more efficient than one
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country
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working
on its
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own
.

In addition
, the
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cooperation
between two
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world
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countries
is
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time
saving. If two
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world
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countries
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come
together, it would take
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less
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time
than one
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country
trying to
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resolve
the
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problem
on its
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own
.
Furthermore
, both country's resources combined to combat the
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problem
would take
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less
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time
than one
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country
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working
on its
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own
.
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, during
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world
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war
one, the
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cooperation
of multiple
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countries
in an effort to
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end
the
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war
lead to the
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end
of
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world
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war
one in
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less
than a year.
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together as two
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countries
or more always take
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time
than one
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country
try to
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resolve
a
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problem
on its
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own
.

In conclusion
, the effort and
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time
spent on
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resolving
a
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problem
by two or more
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countries
are far
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more superior than
one
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country
trying to
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resolve
an
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urgent
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problem
on its
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own
.
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International
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cooperation
can be efficient, while it
also
can be
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time
saving when it
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comes
to
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urgent
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problems
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
79Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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