Shopping malls are the places where youngsters prefer to spend their leisure activity. Due to the growing popularity of the malls mostly in every city and frequently changing global trends in the world of fashion, youngsters desire to look like celebrities, therefore spend an enormous amount of time and money on shopping. Although, buying goods is not a bad thing to consider as it boosts the economy, I think that youngsters should be motivated to have other hobbies than shopping.
Annually, hundreds of shopping malls are built. This is due to the high demand for fashionable goods by young people. Fashion trends change every season, and these trends are promoted by the renowned people. To look stylish like celebrities youngsters spend a lot of their time in the shops. For instance, the recent research published in the Vogue magazine revealed that such consumption behaviour of the young people is influenced by famous people. Thus, to stay stylish youngsters prefer shopping to other activities.
Nevertheless, most of youngsters spend their money on the things they actually don't need. Marketing researches call such behaviour impulse buying. For instance, when my friend sees a dress in the shop of the style she will never wear but it is of a high fashion, she will buy it. This would lead to the waste of money and time instead of spending them for better purposes. Hence, youngsters should be encouraged to spend their pastime doing competitive sports or intellectual activities such as reading or drawing.
To conclude, while shopping does not have any detrimental effects on the youngsters, they should spend their time and money carefully not to have by regrets in the future.
Shopping
malls are the places where youngsters prefer to
spend
their leisure activity. Due to the growing popularity of the malls
mostly
in every city and
frequently
changing global trends in the world of fashion, youngsters desire to look like celebrities,
therefore
spend
an enormous amount of
time
and
money
on
shopping
. Although, buying
goods
is not a
bad
thing to consider as it boosts the economy, I
think
that youngsters should
be motivated
to have other hobbies than shopping.
Annually
, hundreds of
shopping
malls
are built
. This is due to the high demand for fashionable
goods
by young
people
. Fashion trends
change
every season, and these trends
are promoted
by the renowned
people
. To look stylish like celebrities youngsters
spend
a lot of
their
time
in the shops.
For instance
, the recent research published in the Vogue magazine revealed that such consumption
behaviour
of the young
people
is influenced
by
famous
people
.
Thus
, to stay stylish youngsters prefer
shopping
to other activities.
Nevertheless
,
most of youngsters
spend
their
money
on the things they actually don't need. Marketing researches call such
behaviour
impulse buying.
For instance
, when my friend
sees
a dress in the shop of the style she will never wear
but
it is of a high fashion, she will
buy
it. This would lead to the waste of
money
and
time
instead
of spending them for better purposes.
Hence
, youngsters should
be encouraged
to
spend
their pastime doing competitive sports or intellectual activities such as reading or drawing.
To conclude
, while
shopping
does not have any detrimental effects on the youngsters, they should
spend
their
time
and
money
carefully
not to have by regrets in the future.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes