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Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words. v.2

Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. v. 2
At the age of 18 years, most of the countries around the world allow to drive and some people think, license to drive a car or bike should be at least 25 years and others say, 18 is the right age to use a vehicle. I surely agree with the decision at the earliest age, with the following points. After schooling and at the earlier stage of the college, students becoming self dependent. For instance, a student who joins institution, which could be at a long distance from his home town, he uses either the public transport or his own vehicle. The first one could not be available all the time and self driven option is the best, when it comes to have a weekend trip to his house. An example, could narrate better, my friend John was studying in an Arts & Science college and resided in a hostel. He used to go to his home town during the end of the last working day and return on the first day of the college. He always looked tired, because of travel in a public transport, which has multiple stops and layover. After he acquired his license, he bought a car immediately and reached his home in 2 hours. A driving license issued by the government helped him, not be dependent on various modes of travel. On the other hand, at the age of the eighteen, maturity level could be lesser and always try to have fun or excitement, without thinking of its consequences. My nephew was 19 and his father gifted him a car, on the first day of arrival, he took it on the highway and crashed. Fortunately, he had a minor injuries, which taught him a lesson. Later he never gets involved in such kind of activities. Everyone has their own way of thinking, people who had a bad experience themselves or with their closest relatives could suggest, driving should be allowed at 25 years, but as an overall suggestion which stands with my own opinion, the existing system is fine and it is each individual's responsibility to drive in a proper manner.
At the
age
of 18 years, most of the countries around the world
allow
to drive and
some
people
think
, license to drive a car or bike should be at least 25 years
and others
say, 18 is the right
age
to
use
a vehicle. I
surely
agree
with the decision at the earliest
age
, with the following points.

After schooling and at the earlier stage of the college, students becoming self dependent.
For instance
, a student who
joins
institution, which could be at a long distance from his home town, he
uses
either the public transport or his
own
vehicle. The
first
one could not be available all the time and
self driven
option is the best, when it
comes
to have a weekend trip to his
house
. An example, could narrate better, my friend John was studying in
an Arts
& Science college and resided in a hostel. He
used
to go to his home town during the
end
of the last working day and return on the
first
day of the college. He always looked tired,
because
of travel in a public transport, which has multiple
stops
and layover. After he acquired his license, he
bought
a car immediately and reached his home in 2 hours. A driving license issued by the
government
helped
him, not be dependent on various modes of travel.

On the other hand
, at the
age
of the eighteen, maturity level could be lesser and always try to have fun or excitement, without thinking of its consequences. My nephew was 19 and his father gifted him a car, on the
first
day of arrival, he took it on the highway and crashed.
Fortunately
, he had a minor
injuries
, which taught him a lesson. Later he never
gets
involved in such kind of activities.

Everyone has their
own
way of thinking,
people
who had a
bad
experience themselves or with their closest relatives could suggest, driving should be
allowed
at 25 years,
but
as an
overall
suggestion which stands with my
own
opinion, the existing system is fine and it is each individual's responsibility to drive
in a proper manner
.
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
356 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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