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Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. v.1

Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. v. 1
One of the most discussed issues nowadays is the legal age for driving a car. Some people are of the opinion that this age limit should be raised to 25 years to be on the safer side while others believe that people should start driving a car since 18 years old. In my essay, the reasons on both sides of the argument will be analyzed and reasonable conclusion will be made. On the one hand, most countries think that driving should be allowed at 18 years of age for various reasons. Firstly, this is the age when an individual is treated as an adult who can take responsible decisions for himself and others. To illustrate, Russia allows its citizens to exercise their democratic rights and cast vote from 18 years of age. Similarly, alcohol is allowed after 18 years of age. Secondly, at 18 years, the reflexes of person are fully developed and therefore car driving should not be a problem technically if safety norms are followed. Lastly, at 18 years, a person holds responsibility for his actions by the law. For example, if someone commits a crime before 18 years, in most countries, imprisonment is not allowed as he is considered a minor and is sent to a correctional home. Therefore, I believe that 18 years is the right age limit for issuing a driving license. On the other hand, there are arguments which support the age limit of 25 years and above to allow driving. One of the major reasons for this opinion is the reckless impulsive nature of adolescents and teenagers. In their hour of adrenaline rush, they often tend to overlook the safety norms of driving which can lead to fatal consequences. It is believed that, with age comes maturity. To illustrate, a recent survey conducted in the four metropolitan cities of Russia showed that most of the bike accidents over the last 5 years have occurred in the teenage group and the prime reason for the accident was the violation of driving rules like wearing seatbelts. Another probable reason for increasing the age limit may be the fact that by 25 years of age, most people are married and start a family. Having dependents tends to make them responsible and leads to safe driving. In conclusion, I believe that 18 years is the ideal age limit for driving because adulthood is reached. Raising the age limit to 25 will not decrease incidents on rash driving. It is the individuals' duty to drive safely and followed road safety norms.
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reasons
on both sides of the argument will
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and reasonable conclusion will
be made
.

On the one hand, most countries
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allowed
at 18 years of
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age
for various
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reasons
.
Firstly
, this is the
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age
when an individual
is treated
as an adult who can take responsible decisions for himself
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and others
. To illustrate, Russia
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allows
its citizens to exercise their democratic rights and cast vote from 18 years of
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age
.
Similarly
, alcohol is
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allowed
after 18 years of
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age
.
Secondly
, at 18 years, the reflexes of person are
fully
developed and
therefore
car
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driving
should not be a problem
technically
if safety norms
are followed
.
Lastly
, at 18 years, a person holds responsibility for his actions by the law.
For example
, if someone commits a crime
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before
18 years, in most countries, imprisonment is not
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allowed
as he
is considered
a minor and is
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sent
to a correctional home.
Therefore
, I believe that 18 years is the right
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age
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limit
for issuing a
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driving
license.

On the other hand
, there are arguments which support the
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age
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limit
of 25 years and above to
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allow
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driving
. One of the major
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reasons
for this opinion is the reckless impulsive nature of adolescents and
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teenagers
. In their hour of adrenaline rush, they
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often
tend to overlook the safety norms of
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driving
which can lead to fatal consequences. It
is believed
that, with
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age
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comes
maturity. To illustrate, a recent survey conducted in the four metropolitan cities of Russia
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showed
that most of the bike accidents over the last 5 years have occurred in the teenage group and the prime
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reason
for the accident was the violation of
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driving
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rules
like wearing seatbelts. Another probable
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reason
for increasing the
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age
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limit
may be the fact that by 25 years of
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age
, most
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people
are married
and
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start
a family. Having dependents tends to
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make
them responsible and leads to safe driving.

In conclusion
, I believe that 18 years is the ideal
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age
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limit
for
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driving
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because
adulthood
is reached
. Raising the
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age
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limit
to 25 will not decrease incidents on rash
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driving
. It is the individuals' duty to drive
safely
and followed road safety norms.
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
423 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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