Some artists do not reach lucrative and the state should be given financial back to continue with their avenues. Although they will often struggle to make a living and enhance about the skills with their income. However the government support will be created some trivial among the communities. The reasons for my view will be given henceforth.
First it is not worthy that, most of artists are spending massive time and millions of own funds for creating a mesmerize masterpiece. For example, the prominent film director in the Bollywood is contributing giant funds for making a fascinating film. The main challenges that an artist will face recover the money which has contributed to the work. Obviously they would have allocated funds from obtaining a loan facility from a bank. Hence other party financial support should be important to continue their professions and maintain their lives.
Consequently, state funding is not at all required for these individuals. There are many sections of peoples who are really poor and obviously need some help from governing body to meet their basic needs as foods, cloths and health. For instance labours are earning small wages and they do not have a house and proper health insurance. Therefore, before mitigating the financial issues from artists the government should be preserved whole citizen as first.
In conclusion, although the power of the country will be protected artists who expecting financial backing. Furthermore, in this modern era, the talented artists are earning lucrative who is operating new technology. As a contradiction of sorts, I believe that financial supporting is given by the states indispensable not only the artists but also in a whole society.
Some
artists
do not reach lucrative and the state should be
given
financial
back to continue with their avenues. Although they will
often
struggle to
make
a living and enhance about the
skills
with their income.
However
the
government
support will
be created
some
trivial among the communities. The reasons for my view will be
given
henceforth.
First
it is not worthy that, most of
artists
are spending massive time and millions of
own
funds for creating
a mesmerize
masterpiece.
For example
, the prominent film director in the Bollywood is contributing giant funds for making a fascinating film. The main challenges that an
artist
will face recover the money which has contributed to the work.
Obviously
they would have allocated funds from obtaining a loan facility from a bank.
Hence
other party
financial
support should be
important
to continue their professions and maintain their
lives
.
Consequently
, state funding is not at all required for these individuals. There are
many
sections of peoples who are
really
poor and
obviously
need
some
help
from governing body to
meet
their basic needs as foods, cloths and health.
For instance
labours
are earning
small
wages and
they do not have a
house
and proper health insurance.
Therefore
,
before
mitigating the
financial
issues from
artists
the
government
should
be preserved
whole citizen as
first
.
In conclusion
, although the power of the country will
be protected
artists
who expecting
financial
backing.
Furthermore
, in this modern era, the talented
artists
are earning lucrative who is operating new technology. As a contradiction of sorts, I believe that
financial
supporting is
given
by the states indispensable not
only
the
artists
but
also
in a whole society.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes