Some artists do not reach lucrative and the state should be given financial back to continue with their avenues. Although they will often struggle to make a living and enhance about the skills with their income. However the government support will be created some trivial among the communities. The reasons for my view will be given henceforth.
First it is not worthy that, most of artists are spending massive time and millions of own funds for creating a mesmerize masterpiece. For example, the prominent film director in the Bollywood is contributing giant funds for making a fascinating film. The main challenges that an artist will face recover the money which has contributed to the work. Obviously they would have allocated funds from obtaining a loan facility from a bank. Hence other party financial support should be important to continue their professions and maintain their lives.
Consequently, state funding is not at all required for these individuals. There are many sections of peoples who are really poor and obviously need some help from governing body to meet their basic needs as foods, cloths and health. For instance labours are earning small wages and they do not have a house and proper health insurance. Therefore, before mitigating the financial issues from artists the government should be preserved whole citizen as first.
In conclusion, although the power of the country will be protected artists who expecting financial backing. Furthermore, in this modern era, the talented artists are earning lucrative who is operating new technology. As a contradiction of sorts, I believe that financial supporting is given by the states indispensable not only the artists but also in a whole society. 
 Some
  artists
 do not reach lucrative and the state should be  
given
  financial
 back to continue with their avenues. Although they will  
often
 struggle to  
make
 a living and enhance about the  
skills
 with their income.  
However
 the  
government
 support will  
be created
  some
 trivial among the communities. The reasons for my view will be  
given
 henceforth. 
First
 it is not worthy that, most of  
artists
 are spending massive time and millions of  
own
 funds for creating  
a mesmerize
 masterpiece.  
For example
, the prominent film director in the Bollywood is contributing giant funds for making a fascinating film. The main challenges that an  
artist
 will face recover the money which has contributed to the work.  
Obviously
 they would have allocated funds from obtaining a loan facility from a bank.  
Hence
 other party  
financial
 support should be  
important
 to continue their professions and maintain their  
lives
. 
Consequently
, state funding is not at all required for these individuals. There are  
many
 sections of peoples who are  
really
 poor and  
obviously
 need  
some
  help
 from governing body to  
meet
 their basic needs as foods, cloths and health.  
For instance
  labours
 are earning  
small
  wages and
 they do not have a  
house
 and proper health insurance.  
Therefore
,  
before
 mitigating the  
financial
 issues from  
artists
 the  
government
 should  
be preserved
 whole citizen as  
first
. 
In conclusion
, although the power of the country will  
be protected
  artists
 who expecting  
financial
 backing.  
Furthermore
, in this modern era, the talented  
artists
 are earning lucrative who is operating new technology. As a contradiction of sorts, I believe that  
financial
 supporting is  
given
 by the states indispensable not  
only
 the  
artists
  but
  also
 in a whole society. 
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