Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

More people will work from home and more students will study at home is Computer technology become cheaper and accessible. What will be the advantages and disadvantages if this happens? v.1

More people will work from home and more students will study at home is Computer technology become cheaper and accessible. What will be the advantages and disadvantages if this happens? v. 1
English language tests like IELTS is popular among people who intend to migrate to other countries in search of employment or pursue higher education. Nowadays, these tests are more delivered through electronic medium such as the computers, rather than the traditional paper-based tests. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this trend and show that, indeed, computer based tests are superior to paper based tests. Firstly, the most prominent advantage of the computer based test is that it provides the test taker with editing options such as cut, copy and paste. For example, the user need not erase or rewrite the sentences, which saves a lot of time, thus encouraging the user to check his response for eliminating the errors. Secondly, some people are concerned about their handwriting and the way they present their answer in a paper. Fortunately, in computer based tests students have to type their answers using a keyboard, on the computer screen. Hence, the benefits of computer delivered exams are more significant. However, it is accompanied by a few disadvantages such as the typing speed and flow of ideas. Since these tests are time restricted, it demands the person to possess high typing speed, inorder to complete the test on time. But, many students lack this skill. To elucidate, students who have completed type writing course and obtained a certificate for the same are limited. In addition, some students are used to writing exams in the traditional paper based method. If this practice is changed, it would affect the flow of ideas and creativity, which is most essential for writing essays. Overall, the drawbacks pale in comparison to the benefits. To conclude, paper based tests wich is the oldest form of exams are outdated and is now being dominated by the modern computer deivered exams, as it is considered to be the easiest way by many. Clearly, the advantages of the latter outweigh its disadvantages.
English language
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
like IELTS is popular among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who intend to migrate to other countries in search of employment or pursue higher education. Nowadays, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
are more delivered through electronic medium such as the computers,
rather
than the traditional paper-based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this trend and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
that,
indeed
, computer based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
are superior to paper based
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
.

Firstly
, the most prominent advantage of the computer based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
is that it provides the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
taker with editing options such as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
, copy and paste.
For example
, the user need not erase or rewrite the sentences, which saves
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
time,
thus
encouraging the user to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
his response for eliminating the errors.
Secondly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are concerned
about their handwriting and the way they present their answer in a paper.
Fortunately
, in computer based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
type their answers using a keyboard, on the computer screen.
Hence
, the benefits of computer delivered exams are more significant.

However
, it
is accompanied
by a few disadvantages such as the typing speed and flow of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
. Since these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
are time restricted, it demands the person to possess high typing speed,
Possible spelling mistake found.
inorder
to complete the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
test
on time.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
lack this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
. To elucidate,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who have completed type writing course and obtained a certificate for the same
are limited
.
In addition
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to writing exams in the traditional paper based method. If this practice is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
, it would affect the flow of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and creativity, which is most essential for writing essays.
Overall
, the drawbacks pale
in comparison
to the benefits.

To conclude
, paper based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tests
Possible spelling mistake found.
wich
is the oldest form of exams
are outdated
and is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
being dominated
by the modern computer
Possible spelling mistake found.
deivered
exams, as it
is considered
to be the easiest way by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
.
Clearly
, the advantages of the latter outweigh its disadvantages.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay More people will work from home and more students will study at home is Computer technology become cheaper and accessible. What will be the advantages and disadvantages if this happens? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts