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More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. DO you think it is positive or negative development? v.2

More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. DO you think it is positive or negative development? v. 2
Nowadays, technology ruling the world so we should use that automation instead of blaming. I completely go with positive side. However, some drawbacks are there, but that's been very minor when compared to the advantages In the world, everyone have the computer or smart phones, so we can get any information in a second with the help of internet which is very cheap. By using this technology, many of them working in their home, which gives many advantages because many of them do not like to go to the office where they can want put hard work for someone else organization. For instance, one of my friends working as a freelancer, in that software he wants to decide the work and payment. Students have more benefits in that technology because the capacity of understanding is differ from one student to another. Due to this, automation has a lot of educational resources which are free to access and very easy to understand. For example, I usually prefer YouTube for my studies than lecture notes, if one cannot understand that subject, then they can repeat more time until they cleared my doubts. In addition, it has so many courses which are cheap price when compared to outside. Technology provides a lot of offer while using it has more distract and disturbance To conclude, in my view, it has more positive, although some minor cons because positive or negative is depends on our mindsets. Last but not least everyone has pros and cons, so we should focus on the good things
Nowadays,
technology
ruling the world
so
we should
use
that automation
instead
of blaming. I completely
go with
positive
side.
However
,
some
drawbacks are there,
but
that's been
very
minor when compared to the advantages

In the world, everyone
have
the computer or smart phones,
so
we can
get
any information in a second with the
help
of internet which is
very
cheap
. By using this
technology
,
many
of them working in their home, which gives
many
advantages
because
many
of them do not like to go to the office where they can want put
hard
work for someone else organization.
For instance
, one of my friends working as a freelancer, in that software he wants to decide the work and payment.

Students have more benefits in that
technology
because
the capacity of understanding is
differ
from one student to another. Due to this, automation has
a lot of
educational resources which are free to access and
very
easy to understand.
For example
, I
usually
prefer YouTube for my studies than lecture notes, if one cannot understand that subject, then they can repeat more time until they cleared my doubts.
In addition
, it has
so
many
courses which are
cheap
price when compared to outside.
Technology
provides
a lot of offer
while using it has more distract and disturbance

To conclude
, in my view, it has more
positive
, although
some
minor cons
because
positive
or
negative
is depends on our mindsets. Last
but
not
least
everyone has pros and cons,
so
we should focus on the
good
things
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology. DO you think it is positive or negative development? v. 2

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
257 words
8.5
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