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More and more people today want to own famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? v.2

There is no denying the fact that in developed countries people always prefer buying items from famous brands such as clothes and cars however I believe this is a positive as well as negative effects on society this essay will discuss both the views in upcoming paragraphs. Initiating with the best possible benefits the most significant advantage from buying famous companies is this or good quality of items to their customers and people always want the best quality in items along with it they also give the best service and give guarantee and warranty for sometimes after purchasing the product to cite an example if people buy things from good companies they give them one or two years guarantee on products or warranty on damages for the more good company's products around for a long time lastly people prefer buying items from famous brand because of people like to show off to the other people. On the other side there are many drawbacks as well first some small companies would not make businesses and profits for instant if people buy things from good brands some companies who have just started their business would not run good enough and they become financial inadequate secondary premium brands items cost more than local brands so it would effects on people's pocket. To put it in a nutshell this is a mixed back if by famous brands items has many positive then the negative points of this notion may not be underestimated.
There is no denying the fact that in
developed countries
people
always prefer buying
items
from
famous
brands
such as clothes and cars
however
I believe this is a
positive
as well
as
negative
effects on society this essay will discuss both the views in upcoming paragraphs.

Initiating with the best possible benefits the most significant advantage from buying
famous
companies
is this or
good
quality of
items
to their customers and
people
always want the best quality in
items
along with
it
they
also
give the best service and give guarantee and warranty for
sometimes
after purchasing the product to cite an example if
people
buy
things from
good
companies
they give them one or two years guarantee on products or warranty on damages for the more
good
company
's products around for a long time
lastly
people
prefer buying
items
from
famous
brand
because
of
people
like to
show
off to the other
people
.

On the other side there are
many
drawbacks
as well
first
some
small
companies
would not
make
businesses and profits for instant if
people
buy
things from
good
brands
some
companies
who have
just
started
their business would not run
good
enough and
they become financial inadequate secondary premium
brands
items
cost more than local
brands
so
it would
effects
on
people
's pocket.

To put it in a nutshell this is a mixed back if by
famous
brands
items
has
many
positive
then the
negative
points of this notion may not
be underestimated
.
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IELTS essay More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars and other items What are the reasons do you think it is a positive or negative development

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  American English
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