Entwined with the development of technology and increasing demand of using convenient transportation, the number of cars owners has been going up, which can probably leads to several resulting problems.
Firstly, issues with regards to environment are obviously inescapable if people are more interested in using cars as daily means of transport. Specifically, air surroundings will become polluted more acutely due to the disproportionate volume of emissions from this genre of transportation. Secondly, natural resources consuming will also be boosted in order to meet demand of increasing usage of cars. Thirdly, the plain fact is that traffic would be heavier, which induces traffic congestion. And many other repercussions are likely to arise as as consequence of the usage of private cars.
Actionable solutions are really necessary in order to tackle these adverse results. Personally, I believe that public transports need encouraging by subsidizing for people using them or raising tax on cars buyers. In addition, developing public transport services system aims to create more flexibility and convenience for users.
In conclusion, this phenomenon comes as no surprise to contemporary society. However, it necessitates viable and appropriate antidotes from authorities so as to be resolved as effectively as possible.
Entwined with the development of technology and increasing demand of using convenient transportation, the number of
cars
owners has been going up, which can
probably
leads to several resulting problems.
Firstly
, issues
with regards to
environment are
obviously
inescapable if
people
are more interested in using
cars
as daily means of transport.
Specifically
, air surroundings will become polluted more
acutely
due to the disproportionate volume of emissions from this genre of transportation.
Secondly
, natural resources consuming will
also
be boosted
in order to
meet
demand of increasing usage of
cars
.
Thirdly
, the plain fact is that traffic would be heavier, which induces traffic congestion. And
many
other repercussions are likely to arise
as as
consequence of the usage of private cars.
Actionable solutions are
really
necessary in order to tackle these adverse results.
Personally
, I believe that public transports need encouraging by subsidizing for
people
using them or raising tax on
cars
buyers.
In addition
, developing public transport services system aims to create more flexibility and convenience for users.
In conclusion
, this phenomenon
comes
as no surprise to contemporary society.
However
, it necessitates viable and appropriate antidotes from authorities
so as to
be resolved
as
effectively
as possible.
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