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More and more people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are ther more advantage or more disadvantages of such services. v.3

More and more people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are ther more advantage or more disadvantages of such services. v. 3
Internet has taken everything we know to a whole new level. Many things starting from communication and service are now accessible through the network, including online language translation. People are using them more and more as the time goes, but there are always a plus and minus side of everything. We are going to address that in this essay. First, it gives so much convenience to the user, as they can use those apps anywhere and anytime they want. Second, it is a lot cheaper compared to the conventional one. For example, many tourists that come to Indonesia prefer using that service rather than hiring a local guide to be their translator. While it seems like this kind of trend is really promising for a lot of people, it actually has a major drawback that needs to be considered. One of them is it makes people unwilling to learn a foreign language as a whole. As a result, they often get confused to a simple daily conversation and their speech are somewhat unnatural as what they learned are machine generated. In addition to that, the translations are sometimes incorrect, thus leading the user to a faulty conversation. It happens frequently and can make communication pretty much awkward and uncomfortable. In conclusion, online translation app can make people lazy to learn new language and sometimes misleading. On the other hand, it gives so much convenience that is pretty much undeniable. As long as it is used wisely, then it is going to be a very useful stuff for a lot of people.
Internet has taken everything we know to a whole new level.
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Many
things starting from communication and service are
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now
accessible through the network, including online language translation.
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People
are using them more and more
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the time goes,
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there are always a plus and minus side of everything. We are going to address that in this essay.

First
, it gives
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so
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much
convenience to the user, as they can
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use
those apps anywhere and anytime they want. Second, it is a lot cheaper compared to the conventional one.
For example
,
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many
tourists that
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come
to Indonesia prefer using that service
rather
than hiring a local guide to be their translator. While it seems like this kind of trend is
really
promising for
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a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, it actually has a major drawback that needs to
be considered
.

One of them is it
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makes
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people
unwilling to learn a foreign language as a whole.
As a result
, they
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often
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get
confused to a simple daily conversation and their speech are somewhat unnatural as what they learned are machine generated.
In addition
to that, the translations are
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sometimes
incorrect,
thus
leading the user to a faulty conversation. It happens
frequently
and can
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make
communication pretty
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much
awkward and uncomfortable.

In conclusion
, online translation app can
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make
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people
lazy to learn new language and
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sometimes
misleading.
On the other hand
, it gives
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so
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much
convenience
that is
pretty
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much
undeniable. As long as it is
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used
wisely
, then it is going to be a
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very
useful stuff for
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a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay More and more people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are ther more advantage or more disadvantages of such services. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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