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Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.2

Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people. v. 2
In recent years, digitization has become an integral part of our life, and it has impacted almost every aspect of our life including our reading habits. While an increasing number of people prefer to read online news, it has been argued that newspapers will remain the main source of news and information. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, reading newspapers is a force of habit and in the future people will move to digital news. There are many benefits to reading news on the internet. The most important benefit of online news is that it is up-to-date and convenient to read. Traditional newspapers get updated only once a day, but their online versions are updated almost every hour. Also finding information online is easy because one can easily search any topic by entering the keywords and read instant updates. Secondly, reading digital news is easy and enjoyable because one does not have to turn pages like in a newspaper to find information. In addition to this, digitized news can be accessed for free or at a minimal cost, whereas physical newspapers are costlier than their digital versions. For instance, the monthly subscription fee of most newspapers is more than Rs. 200, which makes them at least 85-90% costlier than e-newspapers. Last but not least, people around the globe understood the impact newspapers have on the environment, whereas digital news does not require any paper or ink to publish. Hence, it is considered as eco-friendly. In conclusion, people are fond of reading traditional newspapers. However, considering the advantages of digital news, I firmly believe that people will leave their habit, and switch to digital news, which will become the primary source of information in the near future.
In recent years, digitization has become an integral part of our life, and it has impacted almost every aspect of our life including our
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reading
habits. While an increasing number of
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people
prefer to read
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online
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news
, it has
been argued
that
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newspapers
will remain the main source of
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news
and information. I do not
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agree
with this view. In my opinion,
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reading
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newspapers
is a force of habit and in the future
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people
will
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move
to digital news.

There are
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many
benefits to
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reading
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news
on the internet. The most
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important
benefit of
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online
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news
is that it is up-to-date and convenient to read. Traditional
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newspapers
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get
updated
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only
once a day,
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but
their
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online
versions
are updated
almost every hour.
Also
finding information
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online
is easy
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because
one can
easily
search any topic by entering the keywords and read instant updates.
Secondly
,
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reading
digital
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news
is easy and enjoyable
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because
one does not
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have to
turn pages like in a
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newspaper
to find information.

In addition
to this, digitized
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news
can
be accessed
for free or at a minimal cost, whereas physical
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newspapers
are costlier than their digital versions.
For instance
, the monthly subscription fee of most
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newspapers
is more than Rs. 200, which
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makes
them at least 85-90% costlier than e-newspapers. Last
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but
not least,
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people
around the globe understood the impact
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newspapers
have on the environment, whereas digital
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news
does not require any paper or ink to publish.
Hence
, it
is considered
as eco-friendly.

In conclusion
,
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people
are fond of
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reading
traditional
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newspapers
.
However
, considering the advantages of digital
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news
, I
firmly
believe that
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people
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
their habit, and switch to digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
, which will become the primary source of information in the near future.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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