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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exa v.2

More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 2
Recently, the trend of owning or depending on a private car is rising and majority of people are using it as the main source of transportation. People born in mid 20th century, can clearly indentify the difference of owning a car, it was been a luxury and a possesion than to fufill their neccessity. Whereas, today every home has a privately owned car or motorcycle. To begin with, having a car of our own has some benefits in terms of priacy and provides immense comfort during travel. On the contrart, it brings some devestating environmental problems, for instance, global warming, traffic, deforestation to build new roads to cope up with rising cars. Over-dependence on car use not just affects the environment but also the living beings in it. Humans face serious health issues such as a respiratory and skin illness because of exposure to the smoke released by them and also by the smog in big cities. Environmentalist and social activist had always been cautious and warned the government, but plans and laws to reduce the drastic effects are recently formulated and followed in most of the countries. Strict regulations on car manufacuters, as well as on the consumers, monitoring the number of cars owned by a family, increasing the tax for buying new cars should be implemented, which will have positive impact. Construction of better inter city rail roads, increasing the frequency of buses, using shared vehicle and also encouraging people to use public transportation are realiable solutions I strongly believe, bringing changes in such situations needs cooperation between government and the people. Government should be more flexible and plan for long term goals and people should follow the rules and regulations which brings prosperity for the country and the environment as a whole.
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car
is rising and
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majority of
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people
are using it as the main source of transportation.
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People
born in mid 20th century, can
clearly
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indentify
the difference of owning a
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car
, it
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was been
a luxury and a
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possesion
than to
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fufill
their
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neccessity
. Whereas,
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today
every home has a
privately
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owned
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car
or motorcycle.

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begin
with, having a
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car
of our
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own
has
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some
benefits in terms of
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priacy
and provides immense comfort during travel. On the
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contrart
, it brings
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some
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devestating
environmental problems,
for instance
, global warming, traffic, deforestation to build new roads to cope up with rising
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cars
. Over-dependence on
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car
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use
not
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affects the environment
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but
also
the living beings in it. Humans face serious health issues such as a respiratory and skin illness
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because
of exposure to the smoke released by them and
also
by the smog in
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big
cities.

Environmentalist and social activist had always been cautious and warned the
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government
,
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but
plans and laws to
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reduce
the drastic effects are recently formulated and followed in most of the countries. Strict regulations on
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car
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manufacuters
,
as well
as on the consumers, monitoring the number of
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cars
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owned
by a family, increasing the tax for buying new
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cars
should
be implemented
, which will have
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positive
impact. Construction of better inter city
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rail roads
, increasing the frequency of buses, using shared vehicle and
also
encouraging
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people
to
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use
public transportation are
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realiable
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solutions


I
strongly
believe, bringing
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changes
in such situations needs cooperation between
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government
and the
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people
.
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Government
should be more flexible and plan for long term goals and
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people
should follow the
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rules
and regulations which brings prosperity for the country and the environment as a whole.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 2

Essay
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4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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