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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? v.10

In modern society, there are full of opportunities for people to improve when they live in a big metropolis. however, countless difficulties among the city affects its people. This essay will explain some difficulties people have to face in the cities as well as some solutions which can be taken to improve urban life. One of the main problems in big cities is that the cost of living is higher than in the countryside area. Dwellers have to pay a large budget to afford good living conditions, including housing, transport, and food. Besides, people get annoyed by social problems, such as high crime and poverty rates, while rural areas have less. Another problem is air pollution, which is from the traffic, factories and power plants. In other words, life in the city is toxic. To tackle those issues, I believe authorities could take measures to address them. First of all, the government should invest more money in the building of affordable and social housing, which could help to raise the living standard. Secondly, moving industrial zones to rural areas would be an excellent solution as this strategy will help to decrease the overcrowding, pollution, and traffic congestion in large metropolises and also balance the urban and rural area's population. In conclusion, governments should tackle the bad sides of living in cities by stabilizing overall living standards and economic conditions throughout the country.
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urban life.

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is that the cost of
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is higher than in the countryside area. Dwellers
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have to
pay a large budget to afford
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good
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conditions, including housing, transport, and food.
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,
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people
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annoyed by social problems, such as high crime and poverty rates, while rural areas have less. Another problem is air pollution, which is from the traffic, factories and power plants.
In other words
, life in the city is toxic.

To tackle those issues, I believe authorities could take measures to address them.
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, the
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should invest more money in the building of affordable and social housing, which could
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help
to raise the
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living
standard.
Secondly
, moving industrial zones to rural areas would be an excellent solution as this strategy will
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help
to decrease the overcrowding, pollution, and traffic congestion in large metropolises and
also
balance the urban and rural area's population.

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,
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governments
should tackle the
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living
standards and economic conditions throughout the country.
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IELTS essay More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

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  American English
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232 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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