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Money spent on exploration of space is a complete waste it could be spend more effectively on improvements of living of people To what extent do u agree disagree v.2

Money spent on exploration of space is a complete waste it could be spend more effectively on improvements of living of people 2
World is wasting money on space and don’t using in right way. Space exploration is activity which need huge reserves. Some individuals think that money should be spent on other programs which basic peoples needs and living standard. To my mind, i completely agree with this notion. To begin with, space exploration helps us to find new lands, new sources of energy and potential threats to the globe. The advances in these areas are very essential for future needs. For instance, it is a known fact that we are running out of petroleum or nuclear products. And we need slowly to start founding some new resources or plans how to change what we are using for something new witch we have a lot or we gona have. Dwellers in the world are facing significant number of issues. Many countries citizens are suffering to get food and water plus manny children are not getting a single meal per day and doesn' t have clothes to cover their body. And do not eaven have access to education system due to lack of facilities. Every day, new form of virus or diseases are effectingto theyr health and life. A governments should try to found and spend some money on findings cures for these harmful bacteria’s. For example, researchers are not able to find medicines for lung cancer, HIV, and AIDS from a long time. And secondary for food wather some small houses and edukations for kids. Nations should think about investing in space researching space or investing in countrees or peaoples witch need realy the money. Becouse the space si out there all the time but dayily in some countrees are dienig kids and pepople becous they are sick or don’t have clean wather and food. And secondary to roof uper head and schools.
World is wasting
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money
on
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space
and don’t using in right way.

Space exploration is activity which
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need
huge reserves.
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Some
individuals
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think
that
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money
should
be spent
on other programs which basic peoples
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needs
and living standard. To my mind,
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i
completely
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agree
with this notion.

To
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begin
with,
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space
exploration
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helps us to find
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new
lands,
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new
sources of energy and potential threats to the globe. The advances in these areas are
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very
essential for future
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needs
.
For instance
, it is a known fact that we are running out of petroleum or nuclear products. And we
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need
slowly
to
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start
founding
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some
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new
resources or plans how to
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change
what we are using for something
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new
witch we have a
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lot or
we
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gona
have.

Dwellers in the world are facing significant number of issues.
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countries citizens are suffering to
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get
food and water plus
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manny
children are not getting a single meal per day and
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doesn&
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eaven
have access to education system due to lack of facilities. Every day,
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new
form of virus or diseases are
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effectingto
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theyr
health and life. A
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governments
should try to found and spend
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some
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money
on findings cures for these harmful bacteria’s.
For example
, researchers are not able to find medicines for lung cancer, HIV, and AIDS from a long time. And secondary for food
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wather
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some
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small
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houses
and
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edukations
for kids.

Nations should
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think
about investing in
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space
researching
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space
or investing in
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countrees
or
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peaoples
witch
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need
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realy
the
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money
.
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the
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space
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si
out there all the time
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but
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dayily
in
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some
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countrees
are
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dienig
kids and
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pepople
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becous
they are sick or don’t have clean
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wather
and food. And secondary to roof
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uper
head and schools.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24Mistakes

IELTS essay Money spent on exploration of space is a complete waste it could be spend more effectively on improvements of living of people 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
301 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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