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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions. v.11

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions. v. 11
Nowadays, one of the serious problems that people are facing is global warming and the increasing rate of sea levels. This essay will discuss some issues that are related to this phenomenon. This essay will also tackle some various ways to solve this. There are several causes of global warming; one of these is the occurrence of extreme weather events. For instance, hurricane and storms are likely to contribute more powerful storm surges that can strip away everything it passes which leads to loss not only human life but animals and plants as well. Additionally, the increased risk of flooding in low-coastal areas, this is due to higher global temperature that melts sheets of ice to which it adds the amount of seawater. According to scientists, sea levels are expected to rise 10 to 30 inches or higher at the end of the century. The aforementioned problems can be properly handled by some solutions. One imperative solution is to stop deforestation and start planting more trees and mangroves or any other vegetation to absorb water. Government should encourage its people to plant trees every household. Moreover, people should adopt safer practices that are not harmful to the environment such as recycling. To exemplify, when going to grocery stores, instead of using plastic bags, people should carry their own eco-friendly bags to put all their groceries. In conclusion, global warming is one of the greatest threats to humans these days. The form of destructive storms and increased level of flooding are only a few of the effects of global warming people are facing. However, planting trees and recycling are some solutions to minimize its effect.
Nowadays, one of the serious problems that
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people
are facing is
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global
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warming
and the increasing rate of sea levels. This essay will discuss
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some
issues that
are related
to this phenomenon. This essay will
also
tackle
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some
various ways to solve this.

There are several causes of
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global
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warming
; one of these is the occurrence of extreme weather
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events
.
For instance
, hurricane and storms are likely to contribute more powerful storm surges that can strip away everything it passes which leads to loss not
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only
human life
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but
animals and plants
as well
.
Additionally
, the increased
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risk
of flooding in low-coastal areas, this is due to higher
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global
temperature that melts sheets of ice to which it
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adds
the amount of seawater. According to scientists, sea levels are
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expected
to rise 10 to
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30 inches
or higher at the
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end
of the century.

The aforementioned problems can be
properly
handled by
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some
solutions. One imperative solution is to
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stop
deforestation and
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start
planting more trees and mangroves or any other vegetation to absorb water.
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Government
should encourage its
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people
to plant trees every household.
Moreover
,
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people
should adopt safer practices that are not harmful to the environment such as recycling. To exemplify, when going to grocery stores,
instead
of using plastic bags,
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people
should carry their
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own
eco-friendly bags to put all their groceries.

In conclusion
,
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global
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warming
is one of the greatest threats to humans these days. The form of destructive storms and increased level of flooding are
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only
a few of the effects of
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global
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warming
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people
are facing.
However
, planting trees and recycling are
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some
solutions to minimize its effect.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions. v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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