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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countris such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important intenacional language? Give reasons for your answer. v.1

Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countris such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important intenacional language? v. 1
Nations such as Australia, United Kingdom or United States are chosen for millions of people every year with the aim to study at their schools, colleges or universities. On the first hand, this election is happening due to in these countries are located the better language schools. On the other, because some individuals believe that learn English is essential for the modern world. Every day the population that want to speak English is increasing around the world, because to know this language can enhance your opportunities in the life. Then, a lot of persons would love to learn faster and better this idiom, so for them the best method is whether he or she is in constant contact with native English’s speakers. Therefore, this is one of the reasons that students is choosing English-speaking nations. Indeed, for the globalization today we live in a planet that is always communicated and connected. Nowadays the way in what we can connect us, is although language, and the tongue in which you can express your ideas with all of world is English. For instance, when you travel to another continent and you need to ask something, I am sure that the first phrase that you would say is “sorry, do you speak English? ”. To conclude, the trend of several people to move to study in English-speakers countries will continue. This, for the reason that be in immersion likely could help to learn correctly a language. Also, because every day is more necessary to use this idiom, since is how we can join with the world.
Nations such as Australia, United Kingdom or United States
are chosen
for millions of
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people
every year with the aim to study at their schools, colleges or universities. On the
first
hand, this election is happening due to in these countries
are located
the better
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language
schools. On the other,
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because
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some
individuals believe that learn English is essential for the modern world.

Every day the population that want to speak English is increasing around the world,
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because
to know this
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language
can enhance your opportunities in the life. Then,
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a lot of
persons would
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love
to learn faster and better this idiom,
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so
for them the best method is whether he or she is in constant contact with native English’s speakers.
Therefore
, this is one of the reasons that students is choosing English-speaking nations.

Indeed
, for the globalization
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today
we
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live in a planet
that is
always communicated and connected. Nowadays the way in what we can connect us, is although
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language
, and the tongue in which you can express your
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ideas
with
Consider using "all world" or "all of the world".
all of world
is English.
For instance
, when you travel to another continent and you need to ask something, I am sure that the
first
phrase that you would say is “sorry, do you speak English? ”.

To conclude
, the trend of several
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people
to
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move
to study in English-speakers countries will continue. This, for the reason that be in immersion likely could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to learn
correctly
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
Also
,
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because
every day is more necessary to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
this idiom, since is how we can
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join
with the world.
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countris such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important intenacional language? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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