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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? v.1

Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? v. 1
In this highly competitive era, people are prioritizing to get foreign education. It is seen that English-speaking countries are the most favourable destination for students. In this essay, it will be discussed that why so many people are interested to study in English and the importance of English as an international language. As a matter of fact, English is learnt in schools since childhood and it is the most widely used languages all over the world. Firstly, in many non-English countries, English is studied since childhood and an integral part of the school syllabus. Take the example of Asian counties such as Pakistan and India, most of the students start to study English since the inception of their student life. Therefore, when students decide to go abroad to study, the already have a nice grip on the usage of English. Thus, people who pursue study higher education find it easy to study in English as they do not have to learn any other language from scratch. Secondly, English is the most common language all over the world. While doing an international business, in most cases all communication would be in English. For example, if two employees of different non-English countries would communicate, they would most probably communicate and correspond in English. It is also observed that an employer gives priority while recruiting a new employee if he / she can communicate in English. So, that’s why it is such an important international language. To sum up, students from many countries whom English is not the first language, have already studied English. It helps them in future as it is the most common language. After discussion, it is clear that many people want to study in English as it the most important international language. I hope foreign educational institutes would welcome international students who cannot pay fees by providing scholarships.
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highly
competitive era,
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people
are prioritizing to
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get
foreign education. It is
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seen
that English-speaking
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countries
are the most
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favourable
destination for
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students
. In this essay, it will
be discussed
that why
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so
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many
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people
are interested
to
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study
in English and the importance of English as an
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international
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language
. As a matter of fact, English is
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learnt
in schools since childhood and it is the most
widely
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used
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languages
all over the world.

Firstly
, in
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many
non-English
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countries
, English
is studied
since childhood and an integral part of the school syllabus. Take the example of Asian counties such as Pakistan and India, most of the
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students
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start
to
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study
English since the inception of their
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student
life.
Therefore
, when
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students
decide to go abroad to
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study
, the already have a nice grip on the usage of English.
Thus
,
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people
who pursue
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study
higher education find it easy to
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study
in English as they do not
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have to
learn any other
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language
from scratch.

Secondly
, English is the most common
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language
all over the world. While doing an
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international
business,
in most cases
all communication would be in English.
For example
, if two employees of
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different
non-English
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countries
would communicate, they would most
probably
communicate and correspond in English. It is
also
observed that an employer gives priority while recruiting a new employee if he / she can communicate in English.
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So
, that’s why it is such an
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important
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international
language.

To sum up,
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students
from
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many
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countries
whom English is not the
first
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language
, have already studied English. It
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helps
them in future as it is the most common
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language
. After discussion, it is
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clear
that
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many
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people
want to
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study
in English as it the most
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important
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international
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language
. I hope foreign educational institutes would welcome
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international
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students
who cannot pay fees by providing scholarships.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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