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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.7

Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. with this statement? v. 7
It is argued that memorising circumstantial is the best way to gain achievement in education. Personally, I completely agree with this view. It is true that memorising facts are not sometimes necessity in several cases. For example, with the multiple-choice tests, learners do not necessarily have to memorize the whole knowledge, but only need to master the main content and keywords, then they can completely achieve the highest score. Besides, memorising too much sciolism of many different subjects can cause mistake for students, instead of needing to only understand the main idea of these topics and applying them according to their interpretation in the exams. Apart from the practical disadvantages expressed above, I believe that memorising circumstantial is the most important method to help students to reach flying colours. Firstly, for theoretical and high accuracy requirement subjects such as history, students need to remember the exact dates corresponding to the historical characters and events, in this case, memorising facts is the best way to gain high score. Secondly, memorising exactly scientific theories could help learners sharpen their own memorizing skill from which they accumulate lots of lore and better thinking for solving more problems in social subjects. For example, those better thinking about math theorems could help them to clearly evaluate about economic health as well as the social status of countries from statistic data. In conclusion, each one has a different memorizing ability, although memorizing facts is not probably necessity in some cases, I suppose that it is still a way to achieve the best result in education. Therefore, students should consider in memorising theory as well as practicing their memorising skill to gain the highest score in all of the subjects.
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is argued
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circumstantial is the best way to gain achievement in education.
Personally
, I completely
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agree
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It is true that
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facts are not
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sometimes
necessity in several cases.
For example
, with the multiple-choice
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tests
, learners do not
necessarily
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have to
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memorize
the whole knowledge,
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but
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only
need to master the main content and keywords, then they can completely achieve the highest score.
Besides
,
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memorising
too much
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sciolism
of
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subjects
can cause mistake for
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students
,
instead
of needing to
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only
understand the main
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idea
of these topics and applying them according to their interpretation in the exams.

Apart from the practical disadvantages expressed above, I believe that
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memorising
circumstantial is the most
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important
method to
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help
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students
to reach flying
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.
Firstly
, for theoretical and high accuracy requirement
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subjects
such as history,
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students
need to remember the exact dates corresponding to the historical characters and
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events
,
in this case
,
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memorising
facts is the best way to gain high score.
Secondly
,
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memorising
exactly scientific theories could
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help
learners sharpen their
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own
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memorizing
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skill
from which they accumulate lots of lore and better thinking for solving more problems in social
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subjects
.
For example
, those better thinking about math theorems could
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help
them to
clearly
evaluate about economic health
as well
as the social status of countries from statistic data.

In conclusion
, each one has a
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different
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memorizing
ability, although
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memorizing
facts is not
probably
necessity in
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some
cases, I suppose that it is
still
a way to achieve the best result in education.
Therefore
,
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students
should consider in
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memorising
theory
as well
as practicing their
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skill
to gain the highest score in
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.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. with this statement? v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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