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Mathematics and Children's MisconceptionsAnalyses of children's misconceptions in mathematics indicate that children have considerable difficulties in dealing with fractions. Given the choice of 50 percent and 25 percent, and asked to choose whi v.2

Mathematics and Children's MisconceptionsAnalyses of children's misconceptions in mathematics indicate that children have considerable difficulties in dealing with fractions. Given the choice of 50 percent and 25 percent, and asked to choose whi v. 2
In some cases, rearing children is getting difficult, cause the parent's busy life, scarce of knowledge, not giving importance to children. As a matter of fact, taking parenting courses is becoming popular these days, educated parents investing time and spending a lot of money tend to learn about parenting techniques. But this is not affordable to someone who is actually running behind money. I partially agree that taking parental courses will be helpful for people who want to maintain a positive relationship with their children. To begin with, positively, the main purpose of the institution is to provide different aspects of how parenting skills would impact their children's growth. For instance, if a family has one child and both mother and father is an entrepreneur, then obviously taking care of belongings would not be efficient comparatively with a family who is living with grandparents. As a consequence, some children are not getting family support which is leading them to do crimes. Hence, these courses teach how parents should handle children in a courteous manner and even sometimes parenting skills will be advising parents if they intend to get a divorce. On the other hand, there are many aspects that parenting skills would be useful because it would make, more comfortable relationship with children. Moreover, you can learn, at each stage what to do with the child's life, how to behave with the discipline to the elder people if they meet and even though parents not even in a relationship they can learn how to raise children together. To conclude, I believe attending parenting courses would help parents presumably on what actions to be taken on children's as well as it would also assist parents in making a good way for them to sustain in the competitive world.
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some
cases, rearing
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children
is getting difficult, cause the parent's busy life, scarce of knowledge, not giving importance to
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children
. As a matter of fact, taking
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parenting
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courses
is becoming popular these days, educated
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parents
investing time and spending
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a lot of
money tend to learn about
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parenting
techniques.
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But
this is not affordable to someone who is actually running behind money. I
partially
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agree
that taking parental
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courses
will be helpful for
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people
who want to maintain a
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positive
relationship with their children.

To
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begin
with,
positively
, the main purpose of the institution is to provide
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different
aspects of how
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parenting
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skills
would impact their children's growth.
For instance
, if a family has one child and both mother and father is an entrepreneur, then
obviously
taking care of belongings would not be efficient
comparatively
with a family who is living with grandparents. As a consequence,
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some
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children
are not getting family support which is leading them to do crimes.
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, these
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courses
teach how
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parents
should handle
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children
Consider replacing "in a courteous manner" with the adverb for "courteous"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a courteous manner
and even
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sometimes
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parenting
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skills
will be advising
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parents
if they intend to
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get
a divorce.

On the other hand
, there are
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many
aspects that
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parenting
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skills
would be useful
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because
it would
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make
, more comfortable relationship with
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children
.
Moreover
, you can learn, at each stage what to do with the child's life, how to behave with the discipline to the elder
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people
if they
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meet
and
even though
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parents
not even in a relationship they can learn how to raise
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children
together.

To conclude
, I believe attending
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parenting
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courses
would
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help
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parents
presumably on what actions to
be taken
on children's
as well
as it would
also
assist
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parents
in making a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way for them to sustain in the competitive world.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay Mathematics and Children's MisconceptionsAnalyses of children's misconceptions in mathematics indicate that children have considerable difficulties in dealing with fractions. Given the choice of 50 percent and 25 percent, and asked to choose whi v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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