Many students take part-time jobs while studding in university. Do you think it is a good idea or bad idea? v.1
Many students take part-time jobs while studding in university. Do you think it is a good idea or bad idea? v. 1
Education plays a vital role in every individual’s life, regardless of his or her age, nationality and gender. While, A number of persons argue that kids who are not above the age of 10 they should study common subjects, but other people think that they should have freedom to choose subjects according to their interest. I agree with the former statement, and explain it with examples.
To commence with, there are various reasons that the student’s should focus on learning as many subjects. Firstly, under age 10 kids are very immature and they do not have a capacity to understand what is right or wrong topic for them. Therefore, They are not able to make decisions, which will affect their future life. Secondly, different subjects can make the base of kids such as; mathematic are necessary for general arithmetic. If children have a basic understanding of every subject, then they can decide about their university study according to their field of interest. Otherwise, they are not enough mature to decide for their development.
However, it is certainly true that some people say that children should have the freedom to choose subject according to interest, but there are very few reasons, which support this statement, firstly, under age 10 kids most probably choose the subject related to games and they can gain depth of knowledge in it, like, the physical science. Therefore, their interest will be more towards games and they will not be accompanied by bad habits as well as keep away from drugs. Secondly, parents are very busy so children can spend their leisure time in games, than on social media. In overview, in future their interest will be just in sports and they can not find a job any other field and it will create unemployment.
To conclude, while there are few benefits if kids choose subjects according to interest, yet I think if kids study all kinds of subjects it could be fruitful in future.
Education plays a vital role in every individual’s life, regardless of
his or her
age
, nationality and gender. While, A number of persons argue that
kids
who are not above the
age
of 10 they should study common
subjects
,
but
other
people
think
that they should have freedom to
choose
subjects
according
to their
interest
. I
agree
with the former statement, and
explain
it with examples.
To commence with, there are various reasons that the student’s should focus on learning as
many
subjects
.
Firstly
, under
age
10
kids
are
very
immature and
they do not have a capacity to understand what is right or
wrong
topic for them.
Therefore
, They are not able to
make
decisions, which will affect their future life.
Secondly
,
different
subjects
can
make
the base of
kids
such as; mathematic are necessary for general arithmetic. If children have a basic understanding of every
subject
, then they can decide about their university study
according
to their field of
interest
.
Otherwise
, they are not
enough
mature to decide for their development.
However
, it is
certainly
true that
some
people
say that children should have the freedom to
choose
subject
according
to
interest
,
but
there are
very
few reasons, which support this statement,
firstly
, under
age
10
kids
most
probably
choose
the
subject
related to
games and
they can gain depth of knowledge in it, like, the physical science.
Therefore
, their
interest
will be more towards
games and
they will not
be accompanied
by
bad
habits
as well
as
keep
away from drugs.
Secondly
, parents are
very
busy
so
children can spend their leisure time in games, than on social media. In overview, in future their
interest
will be
just
in
sports and
they can not find a job any other field and it will create unemployment.
To conclude
, while there are few benefits if
kids
choose
subjects
according
to
interest
,
yet
I
think
if
kids
study all kinds of
subjects
it could be fruitful
in future
.
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