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Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. with this statement? v. 1
In this modern era, technological evolutions in many sectors are creating ample opportunities for students to study and work anywhere across the globe. These days, many students decide to move abroad to pursue their higher studies thinking to have a better career. In my opinion, there are pros and cons in studying abroad, but I firmly believe that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks. In this competitive world, many students aspire to learn multiple degrees hoping to find better opportunities with their career. Firstly, they tend to complete their undergraduate career in their native country. Secondly, they are passionate to further their studies abroad. Having international exposure in studies and work always helps individual to explore various aspects of their interest areas. In addition to that, students can acquire multi language skills by learning with people from different ethnic background. For example, it has become very common among students in India who graduated from Automobile Engineering to study abroad in Germany for their postgraduate degree. In such cases, the prerequisite for prospective students is that they should complete a certain level of German language before applying for admission. They later develop their foreign language skills while pursuing their degree which makes them feel confident during a job hunt. Finding good Universities in abroad is always challenging. It requires profound knowledge about various aspects such as University ranking, University reputation, course accreditation, cost of living, commuting, job opportunities post graduation and many more. There are many educational consultancies who can assist students in all these areas. Some students prefer doing research on their own. Social media platforms play a pivotal role in finding connections in dream destinations. On the other hand, there are numerous fake agents across the globe who act as University representatives and tries to charge money from ignorant students and they cheat them later. Therefore, students should do a little study about the authenticity of such agents before paying for any process. There are many drawbacks of going abroad as well. Some of them includes suffering from loneliness, running out of money due to high exchange rates and managing monthly expenses. To conclude, studying abroad in developed countries provides better opportunity for individuals. It is a significant decision as it involves huge financial expenses. Thus, with proper goals and good financial assistance, students can opt for a better life abroad.
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study
and work anywhere across the globe. These days,
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decide to
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to pursue their higher
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thinking to have a
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career. In my opinion, there are pros and cons in studying
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abroad
,
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but
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firmly
believe that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.

In this competitive world,
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students
aspire to learn multiple degrees hoping to find
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better
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opportunities
with their career.
Firstly
, they tend to complete their undergraduate career in their native country.
Secondly
, they are passionate to
further
their
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studies
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abroad
. Having international exposure in
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studies
and work always
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helps
individual to explore various aspects of their interest areas.
In addition
to that,
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students
can acquire multi language
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skills
by learning with
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people
from
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different
ethnic background.
For example
, it has become
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very
common among
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students
in India who graduated from Automobile Engineering to
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study
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abroad
in Germany for their postgraduate degree. In such cases, the prerequisite for prospective
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students
is that they should complete a certain level of German language
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before
applying for admission. They later develop their foreign language
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skills
while pursuing their degree which
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makes
them feel confident during a job hunt.

Finding
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good
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Universities
in
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is always challenging. It requires profound knowledge about various aspects such as
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University
ranking,
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University
reputation, course accreditation, cost of living, commuting, job
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opportunities
post graduation and
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many
more. There are
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many
educational consultancies who can assist
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students
in all these areas.
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Some
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students
prefer doing research on their
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own
. Social media platforms play a pivotal role in finding connections in dream destinations.
On the other hand
, there are numerous fake agents across the globe who act as
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University
representatives and tries to charge money from ignorant
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students and
they cheat them later.
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,
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students
should do a
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little
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study
about the authenticity of such agents
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before
paying for any process. There are
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many
drawbacks of going
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abroad
as well
.
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Some
of them includes suffering from loneliness, running out of money due to high exchange rates and managing monthly expenses.

To conclude
, studying
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abroad
in
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developed countries
provides
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better
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opportunity
for individuals. It is a significant decision as it involves huge financial expenses.
Thus
, with proper goals and
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good
financial assistance,
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students
can opt for a
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better
life
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abroad
.
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IELTS essay Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
391 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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