Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The given table chart shows data about the total value in billions of dollars of imported fish to the US while the bar chart illustrate percentage of shown countries in terms of fish provision to the US. v.1

The given table chart shows data about the total value in billions of dollars of imported fish to the US while the bar chart illustrate percentage of shown countries in terms of fish provision to the US. v. 1
English is indeed a necessary language to survive life, namely education purpose, work and passing conversations. Teaching English at school essential than native language. This essay will explain both sides of the impact and benefits of learning English. Firstly, English is taught to a tween or above could preferable to improve the local cultural activities and traditions. This means, learning the local language is helping to know about religious activities and get to know about their ancestors traditions and stories. For instance, the Indian cultural development association said that 36 different languages among the Indians, as well as teaching local language before age 10 would be the gateway to improve the language and prevent cultural activities from demolishing. however, providing English is must among the pupils, but not at beginning Aug. Another point to consider is that upper educations have been provided in the English language, thus proving the English language is must in the schooling period. In other words, most of the diplomas, and degrees have been given by British universities all over the world, therefore pupils should have the ability and skill in English. Secondly, these days, most of the firms and factories request English skills and talents, such as speaking and writing abilities. For example, in Asia, most of the companies are enrolling the candidates, who are good in English, because it would help to communicate and pass the information easily and tackle the problems in future. Therefore, English is a staple requirement to teach at school or education sectors to face the future. In conclusion, I strongly believe that, although English is very important for improving knowledge and work, the local language is more important to develop and continuing the tradition to the next generation. So, English should be taught to tween could benefit.
English is
indeed
a necessary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
to survive life,
namely
education purpose, work and passing conversations. Teaching English at school
Use "(essential)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
essential
than native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. This essay will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
both sides of the impact and benefits of learning English.

Firstly
, English
is taught
to a tween or above could preferable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
cultural activities and traditions. This means, learning the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is helping to know about religious activities and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know about their ancestors traditions and stories.
For instance
, the Indian cultural development association said that 36
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
among the Indians,
as well
as teaching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
age 10 would be the gateway to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
cultural activities from demolishing.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
however
, providing English is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
among the pupils,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not at beginning Aug.

Another point to consider is that upper educations have
been provided
in the English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
,
thus
proving the English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
in the schooling period.
In other words
, most of the diplomas, and degrees have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
by British universities all over the world,
therefore
pupils should have the ability and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
in English.
Secondly
, these days, most of the firms and factories request English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and talents, such as speaking and writing abilities.
For example
, in Asia, most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
are enrolling the candidates, who are
Use "good at" to mean "skilled" with school subjects. Try this: "good at English".
good in English
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to communicate and pass the information
easily
and tackle the problems
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.
Therefore
, English is a staple requirement to teach at school or education sectors to face the future.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that, although English is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for improving knowledge and work, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to develop and continuing the tradition to the
next
generation.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, English should
be taught
to tween could benefit.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The given table chart shows data about the total value in billions of dollars of imported fish to the US while the bar chart illustrate percentage of shown countries in terms of fish provision to the US. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts