Nowadays, many people believe that education in university level is the only way to get a good job. In contrast, some people think that working after high school is better since they can obtain experience in work environment. I will outline both issues with reasons and examples.
Talking about a good job, it is not easy to achieve. We have to prepare ourselves both in terms of education and skill because they need to cooperate to make a good capability in ourselves, which we know as a prior thing that employers seek in the employees. For example, in the case of a job interview, employer commonly ask about our last education whether it is appropriate for the job position or not. They believe that higher education provides people not only in knowledge term but also their maturity.
Furthermore, through university education, we are not only given subsequences of theories but also practices. So, before we go to the work field, we already know how to adapt to our expected job based on our background education.
It is true that we need experiences to do better in our job, but it cannot be denied that education is more important than it. Take a teacher’s career as an example. By teaching earlier, you may have more experience than the new one who just graduated from university. But graduated university students can teach their students with better theories or concept from each material with good methods.
To sum up, I must say that we need higher education to gain more information from the experts about our special field, therefore we can do our best to show our capability in front of employers to emphasise them that we deserve that job. So, I tend to disagree that work after school is better than to continue our study at university.
Nowadays,
many
people
believe that
education
in
university
level is the
only
way to
get
a
good
job
.
In contrast
,
some
people
think
that working after high school is
better
since they can obtain experience in work environment. I will outline both issues with reasons and examples.
Talking about a
good
job
, it is not easy to achieve. We
have to
prepare ourselves both in terms of
education
and
skill
because
they need to cooperate to
make
a
good
capability in ourselves, which we know as a prior thing that employers seek in the employees.
For example
, in the case of a
job
interview, employer
commonly
ask about our last
education
whether it is appropriate for the
job
position or not. They believe that higher
education
provides
people
not
only
in knowledge term
but
also
their maturity.
Furthermore
, through
university
education
, we are not
only
given
subsequences of theories
but
also
practices.
So
,
before
we go to the work field, we already know how to adapt to our
expected
job
based on our background education.
It is true that we need experiences to do
better
in our
job
,
but
it cannot
be denied
that
education
is more
important
than it. Take a teacher’s career as an example. By teaching earlier, you may have more experience than the new one who
just
graduated from
university
.
But
graduated
university
students can teach their students with
better
theories or concept from each material with
good
methods.
To sum up, I
must
say that we need higher
education
to gain more information from the experts about our special field,
therefore
we can do our best to
show
our capability in front of employers to
emphasise
them that we deserve that
job
.
So
, I tend to disagree that work after school is
better
than to continue our study at
university
.
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