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Many people rely on news reporting to their information. However some think that the journalists cannot be trusted. Do you agree or disagree and what qualities should a journalist have? v.1

Many people rely on news reporting to their information. However some think that the journalists cannot be trusted. and what qualities should a journalist have? v. 1
Nowadays, ethics in journalism is a contentious issue. However there are divergent opinions as some people argue that journalist cannot be trusted while others believe that they are imperative for accessing information. I totally agree with the statement that media person should not be trusted and shall discuss my views in the following essay. The primary reason why I agree that journalists should not be trusted is because reporters usually work for newspapers or TV channels, and these channels are owned by the big corporate houses. For instance, the International Court of Justice has published a report and banned 12 news channels which were working for business tycoons to fulfil their hidden motives. This is particularly concerning as big corporate families use television and print media journalists for their political agenda, which is not healthy for any democracy. Therefore, journalists are not a reliable source of information as they have to act according to their owners or directors. With regards to the qualities of a journalist, they must have integrity and honesty while doing their job. Additionally, a journalist should not compromise with his integrity in publishing an article or news. For example, the Media Association of India has issued a strict warning to some media journalists to maintain the ethical standards of reporting. This is because journalists are puppet in the hands of the government and used them for their media campaigning. Furthermore, it is the moral duty of a journalist to maintain honesty with in his profession and motivates other to do their job. As a result, these qualities will help to maintain the ethics in journalism which is significant showing a downward trend, in the current scenario. In conclusion, I overwhelmingly agree with the statement that media people are not reliable source of information as they are continuously working for the corporate people and executives. However, the qualities such as integrity and honesty would help in maintaining the ethical standards of journalism.
Nowadays, ethics in journalism is a contentious issue.
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people
argue that
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journalist
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agree
with the statement that
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person should not
be trusted
and shall discuss my views in the following essay.

The primary reason why I
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agree
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journalists
should not
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because
reporters
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work for newspapers or TV channels, and these channels are
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owned
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big
corporate
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houses
.
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particularly
concerning as
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big
corporate families
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use
television and print
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media
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journalists
for their political agenda, which is not healthy for any democracy.
Therefore
,
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journalists
are not a reliable source of information as they
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have to
act according to their owners or directors.

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the qualities of a
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journalist
, they
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must
have integrity and honesty while doing their job.
Additionally
, a
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journalist
should not compromise with his integrity in publishing an article or news.
For example
, the
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Media
Association of India has issued a strict warning to
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some
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media
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journalists
to maintain the ethical standards of reporting. This is
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because
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journalists
are puppet in the hands of the
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government
and
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used
them for their
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media
campaigning.
Furthermore
, it is the moral duty of a
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journalist
to maintain honesty with in his profession and motivates other to do their job.
As a result
, these qualities will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to maintain the ethics in journalism which is significant showing a downward trend, in the
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current
scenario.

In conclusion
, I
overwhelmingly
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agree
with the statement that
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media
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people
are not reliable source of information as they are
continuously
working for the corporate
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people
and executives.
However
, the qualities such as integrity and honesty would
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help
in maintaining the ethical standards of journalism.
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IELTS essay Many people rely on news reporting to their information. However some think that the journalists cannot be trusted. and what qualities should a journalist have? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
325 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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