Different situations can enter into one’s life regarding position and financial issues. A certain amount of people advocates that problems such as unwanted workplace or running out of money should be accepted whereas others debate that such conditions should be improved. This essay will discuss why some people believe that accepting the critical situations is better, but why it is much more better in my opinion to overcome with these difficulties.
Unsatisfactory career or shortage of money is found among different people in every society. The unemployment has left people with no option except to take a workplace which is not relevant to their field and hence it leads to lack of interest and satisfaction. For instance, it is found in a recent research that 40% of people in the world are not working in their corresponding fields. Therefore, some people believe on the basis of this finding that it is good to accept the current situation of oneself. However, trying hard can change the bad situations and it is better option according to other people.
Looking for opportunities or developing interest in the unsatisfactory workplace can lead to a better situation. For example, leaving an unwanted post with handsome salary package and choosing a low salary, but relevant appointment can give pleasure and relaxation. Hence, it is claimed by a section of people that looking for improved circumstances is better.
In conclusion, bad times are part of life. In my opinion, it is meaningful to keep trying and look forward to improve the unacceptable stages.
Different
situations
can enter into one’s life regarding position and financial issues. A certain amount of
people
advocates that problems such as unwanted workplace or running out of money should be
accepted
whereas others debate that such conditions should be
improved
. This essay will discuss why
some
people
believe that accepting the critical
situations
is
better
,
but
why it is much more
better
in my opinion to overcome with these difficulties.
Unsatisfactory career or shortage of money
is found
among
different
people
in every society. The unemployment has
left
people
with no option except to take a workplace which is not relevant to their field and
hence
it leads to lack of interest and satisfaction.
For instance
, it
is found
in a recent research that 40% of
people
in the world are not working in their corresponding fields.
Therefore
,
some
people
believe on the basis of this finding that it is
good
to accept the
current
situation
of oneself.
However
, trying
hard
can
change
the
bad
situations
and it is
better
option according to other
people
.
Looking for opportunities or developing interest in the unsatisfactory workplace can lead to a
better
situation
.
For example
, leaving an unwanted post with handsome salary package and choosing a low salary,
but
relevant appointment can give pleasure and relaxation.
Hence
, it
is claimed
by a section of
people
that looking for
improved
circumstances is better.
In conclusion
,
bad
times are part of life. In my opinion, it is meaningful to
keep
trying and look forward to
improve
the unacceptable stages.
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