With the proliferation of social media websites and mobile applications, the uses use of the internet among youngsters redundant to socialise with friends is gradually increasing which has numerous detrimental impacts on them. I believe that to cope with this situation the government should take several measures and a parent should devote attention to their children.
Not only should the government make people aware about the disastrous consequences of the extreme uses of social media in daily routine but also ratify some policies to control its daily accessibility. For instance, an immensely popular mobile video game PUBG has recently restricted increased online playing time to 4 hours, which reduced the average screen time of youngsters to a large extent. Thus, if people will have limited time to use social media such as Facebook, Instagram in a day than it would will compel them to assign more attention to important tasks. Moreover, different campaigns should be run by the government to make people aware about the negatives of extreme uses of social media that force people to think twice before its use.
Furthermore, parents should devote decent attention to their children internet’s browsing time. A recent report by the BBC has revealed that about forty percent of young children who have no parent’s parental supervision spend most of their leisure time on surfing the social media portals. This not only effect affects their academic performances, but also causes of several health diseases such as weak eyesight. A little attention from a parent on children’s internet accessibility could save them from all of these detrimental effects which again lead to a better formation of their future.
In conclusion, in order to mitigate social media addiction among youngsters both the government and parents should come forward, otherwise, the society will pay a heavy economic and social price.
With the proliferation of
social
media
websites and mobile applications, the
uses
use
of the internet among youngsters redundant to
socialise
with friends is
gradually
increasing which has numerous detrimental impacts on them. I believe that to cope with this situation the
government
should take several measures and a
parent
should devote
attention
to their children.
Not
only
should the
government
make
people
aware about the disastrous consequences of the extreme
uses
of
social
media
in daily routine
but
also
ratify
some
policies to control its daily accessibility.
For instance
, an
immensely
popular mobile video game PUBG has recently restricted increased online playing
time
to 4 hours, which
reduced
the average screen
time
of youngsters to a large extent.
Thus
, if
people
will have limited
time
to
use
social
media
such as Facebook, Instagram in a day than it
would will
compel them to assign more
attention
to
important
tasks.
Moreover
,
different
campaigns should
be run
by the
government
to
make
people
aware about the negatives of extreme
uses
of
social
media
that force
people
to
think
twice
before
its
use
.
Furthermore
,
parents
should devote decent
attention
to their children internet’s browsing
time
. A recent report by the BBC has revealed that about forty percent of young children who have no
parent’s
parental supervision spend most of their leisure
time
on surfing the
social
media
portals. This not
only
effect
affects their academic performances,
but
also
causes of several health diseases such as weak eyesight. A
little
attention
from a
parent
on children’s internet accessibility could save them from all of these detrimental effects which again lead to a better formation of their future.
In conclusion
, in order to mitigate
social
media
addiction among youngsters both the
government
and
parents
should
come
forward,
otherwise
, the society will pay a heavy economic and
social
price.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes