Many people opine that all university students should study whatever they like, whereas some people think the university should teach some subjects that only related to science and technology for students. In my opinion, teaching only science and technology subjects in the university can increase the number of graduates in these subjects, but it will be better if have the quality graduates in all subjects because students like that thing they learn.
If the university teaching only science and technology, student will choose to study some subject in this area. A number of graduates in these subjects will be increased, but some students have to learn about something they do not really like. For example, my friend study about computer programs at the university because her father said working in this field can make a lot of money. After graduating, she is a programmer, but she does not like her job and try to find a new career.
Students who study subject that they like will be a quality graduate and they can be a professional in their career, whether science or art. They have fun with their job because they like it and their job will useful for other people. My uncle, for instance, he really loves music and he chose to study about music at the university. Presently, he is a music teacher and children very happy when learn with him.
In conclusion, every subject in the university is useful for people, so students should have an opportunity to study in a subject that they like. I am convinced people who love their subject and their career can be given the benefit for the community.
Many
people
opine that all
university
students
should
study
whatever they like, whereas
some
people
think
the
university
should teach
some
subjects
that
only
related to
science
and technology for
students
. In my opinion, teaching
only
science
and technology
subjects
in the
university
can increase the number of
graduates
in these
subjects
,
but
it will be better if have the quality
graduates
in all
subjects
because
students
like that thing they learn.
If the
university
teaching
only
science
and technology,
student
will choose to
study
some
subject
in this area. A number of
graduates
in these
subjects
will
be increased
,
but
some
students
have to
learn about something they do not
really
like.
For example
, my friend
study
about computer programs at the
university
because
her father said working in this field can
make
a lot of
money. After graduating, she is a programmer,
but
she does not like her job and try to find a new career.
Students who
study
subject
that they like will be a quality
graduate and
they can be a professional in their career, whether
science
or art. They have fun with their job
because
they like it and their job will useful for other
people
. My uncle,
for instance
, he
really
loves
music and
he chose to
study
about music at the
university
.
Presently
, he is a music teacher and children
very
happy when learn with him.
In conclusion
, every
subject
in the
university
is useful for
people
,
so
students
should have an opportunity to
study
in a
subject
that they like. I
am convinced
people
who
love
their
subject
and their career can be
given
the benefit for the community.
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42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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