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Many people believe the government should spend money on faster public transport. Others think that money should be spent on different aspects of public transportation, such as cost reduction and environment conservation. Discuss both views and give your v.2

Many people believe the government should spend money on faster public transport. Others think that money should be spent on different aspects of public transportation, such as cost reduction and environment conservation. 2
TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE PEOPLE LIFE MORE EFFORTLESS. HENCE, CERTAIN FOLKS CHOOSE TO BUY A FOOD STUFF FROM A STORE WHERE VARIETY OF FOOD AVAILABLE. WHERE AS ONLINE FOOD SHOPPING IS BECOMING MOST PREFERED APPROACH AMONG WOMEN NOWADAYS. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE IMPORTANT ADVANTAGE OF SUPERMARKET PURCHASING AND E-COMMERCE BUYING TECHNIQUE. SECONDLY, STATE THE OPINION IN THE FAVOUR OF SUPEMARKET FOOD PURCHASING. ON THE ON HAND, SUPERMARKET FOOD CONSIDERED TO BE FRESH AND INDIVIDUAL HAS A OPTION TO LOOK PROPERLY AND BUY THE FOOD AS A RESULT, PEOPLE HAVE FREEDOM OF CHOOSING THE VARIETIES OF FOOD. HENCE, THERE ARE LESS CHANCE OF GETING EXPIRED PRODUCTS WHICH IS NOT CONSIDERED TO USE FURTHER. FOR EXAMPLE, INDIAN MARKET SURVEY FROM A VILLAGES REVEALED THAT 80 % OF VILLAGE CIVILIAN EATING FRESH FOOD EVERYDAY DUE TO ENORMOUS DIVERSITY. HOWEVER IT DOES REQUIRED A WALKING EFFORT BY PEOPLE WHICH IS HARD FOR TODAY'S INDIVIDUAL TO DO BECAUSE OF THE LASYNESS. ON THE OTHER HAND, E-COMMERCE WILL REDUCED THE EFFORT OF WALKING AND MADE AN EASY SHOPPING EXPERIENCE THAT IS MUCH NEEDED IN THE BUSY LIFE WHERE FOLKS DO NOT HAVE ENOUGH TIME FOR HOUSEHOLD CHORES. THEREFORE, THE NEW SYSTEM MAKE PEOPLE FREE OF EVERYDAY TENSION AND ALLOWS THE TO OPT FOR THE ESSENTIAL PROFESSIONAL WORKS. FOR INSTANCE, ONE IN THE SUBARB AREAS, 90% OF CIVILIAN PREFERED TO PURCHASE THEIR THE EATING PRODUCTS FROM ONLINE STORE WHICH HAS A FACILITY OF DOOR TO DOOR ORDER DELIVERY. THE REASON IS THIS SAVES THEIR TIME TO GO FOR PURCHASING. AFTER ALL THE DISCUSSION ABOVE, I BELIEVE, THE BEST METHOD IS THE SUPERMARKET GROCERY AS IT ALSO PROVIDE THE WELLNESS ACTIVITY AND FROM ONLINE GROCERY HAS A MORE DANGERS SUCH AS FRAUD AND CHEATING CUSTOMER AND SO ON. IN CONCLUSION, BOTH THE METHOD INDEED SATISFY THE NEEDS OF AN INDIVIDUALS THOUGH ONE SHOULD NEVER IGNORE THE CONSEQUENCE OF BUYING FOOD THROUGH E-COMMERCE. IF, ONLINE GROCERY STORES HAVE SOME VEGOROUS RULES AND REGULATION THEN SURLY IT CAN BE THE BEST METHOD IN THE NEAR FUTURE.
TECHNOLOGY HAS MADE
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PEOPLE
LIFE MORE EFFORTLESS.
HENCE
, CERTAIN FOLKS CHOOSE TO
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BUY
A
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FOOD
STUFF FROM A STORE WHERE VARIETY OF
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FOOD
AVAILABLE.
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WHERE AS
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ONLINE
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FOOD
SHOPPING IS BECOMING MOST
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PREFERED
APPROACH AMONG WOMEN NOWADAYS.
FIRSTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS THE
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IMPORTANT
ADVANTAGE OF SUPERMARKET PURCHASING AND E-COMMERCE BUYING TECHNIQUE.
SECONDLY
, STATE THE OPINION IN THE
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FAVOUR
OF
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SUPEMARKET
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FOOD
PURCHASING.

ON THE ON HAND, SUPERMARKET
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FOOD
CONSIDERED TO BE FRESH AND INDIVIDUAL HAS A OPTION TO LOOK
PROPERLY
AND
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BUY
THE
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FOOD
AS A RESULT
,
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PEOPLE
HAVE FREEDOM OF CHOOSING THE VARIETIES OF
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FOOD
.
HENCE
, THERE ARE LESS CHANCE OF
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GETING
EXPIRED PRODUCTS WHICH IS NOT CONSIDERED TO
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USE
FURTHER
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, INDIAN MARKET SURVEY FROM A VILLAGES REVEALED THAT 80 % OF VILLAGE CIVILIAN EATING FRESH
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FOOD
EVERYDAY DUE TO ENORMOUS DIVERSITY.
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HOWEVER
IT DOES
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REQUIRED
A WALKING EFFORT BY
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PEOPLE
WHICH IS
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HARD
FOR
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TODAY
'S INDIVIDUAL TO DO
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BECAUSE
OF THE
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LASYNESS
.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, E-COMMERCE WILL
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REDUCED
THE EFFORT OF WALKING AND MADE AN EASY SHOPPING EXPERIENCE
THAT IS
MUCH NEEDED IN THE BUSY LIFE WHERE FOLKS DO NOT HAVE
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ENOUGH
TIME FOR HOUSEHOLD CHORES.
THEREFORE
, THE NEW SYSTEM
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MAKE
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PEOPLE
FREE OF EVERYDAY TENSION AND
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ALLOWS
THE TO OPT FOR THE ESSENTIAL PROFESSIONAL WORKS.
FOR INSTANCE
, ONE IN THE
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SUBARB
AREAS, 90% OF CIVILIAN
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PREFERED
TO
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PURCHASE
THEIR THE EATING PRODUCTS FROM
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ONLINE
STORE WHICH HAS A FACILITY OF DOOR TO DOOR ORDER DELIVERY. THE REASON IS THIS SAVES THEIR TIME TO GO FOR PURCHASING.

AFTER ALL
THE DISCUSSION ABOVE, I BELIEVE, THE BEST METHOD IS THE SUPERMARKET GROCERY AS IT
ALSO
PROVIDE THE WELLNESS ACTIVITY AND FROM
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ONLINE
GROCERY HAS A MORE
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DANGERS
SUCH AS FRAUD AND CHEATING CUSTOMER AND
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SO
ON.

IN CONCLUSION
, BOTH THE METHOD
INDEED
SATISFY THE NEEDS OF AN INDIVIDUALS THOUGH ONE SHOULD NEVER
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IGNORE
THE CONSEQUENCE OF BUYING
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FOOD
THROUGH E-COMMERCE. IF,
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ONLINE
GROCERY STORES HAVE
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SOME
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VEGOROUS
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RULES
AND REGULATION THEN SURLY IT CAN BE THE BEST METHOD IN THE NEAR FUTURE.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people believe the government should spend money on faster public transport. Others think that money should be spent on different aspects of public transportation, such as cost reduction and environment conservation. 2

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  American English
5 paragraphs
337 words
7.5
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