Many individuals believe that augmentation of violence is directly proportional to the number of movies related to the crimes and the statutory bodies should have onus to scrutinize the media so that it can be dwindled. I concur with this notion and will elucidate my views along with a conclusion in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is ubiquitous that now most of the youth is inclined towards watching these thriller movies which is related to executing the crimes or murder perfectly and there are many incidences when youngsters intimated these movie crimes in real life. So such movies which show the high graphic content should be examined very strictly or a certificate should be provided for the producers as murder provoking descend should be prohibited in cinemas. Demographic trends have revealed that in the last year, most of the crime is motivated from such movies. Thus, it is essential that such films should be censored by the censor board.
Furthermore, youngsters and adolescents are most vulnerable while watching these movies as they are deprived of the negative repercussions of such heinous crimes. If movie makers produce such kind of movies, then they should be penalised with heavy taxes so that they will think twice before making it; for instance, the Swedish Government had imposed a 40 percent tax on such movie directors and as a result they don't produce these films, eventually the crime rate has diminished considerably in that country.
To encapsulate, a stringent steps should be taken by an administrators so that there would be less movies related to crimes in nesr future and teenagers can have a peaceful life
Many
individuals believe that augmentation of violence is
directly
proportional to the number of
movies
related to the
crimes
and the statutory bodies should have onus to scrutinize the media
so
that it can
be dwindled
. I concur with this notion and will elucidate my views along with a conclusion in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is ubiquitous that
now
most of the youth
is inclined
towards watching these thriller
movies
which
is related
to executing the
crimes
or murder
perfectly
and there are
many
incidences when youngsters intimated these
movie
crimes
in real life.
So
such
movies
which
show
the high graphic content should
be examined
very
strictly
or a certificate should
be provided
for the producers as murder provoking descend should
be prohibited
in cinemas. Demographic trends have revealed that in the last year, most of the
crime
is motivated
from such
movies
.
Thus
, it is essential that such films should
be censored
by the censor board.
Furthermore
, youngsters and adolescents are most vulnerable while watching these
movies
as they
are deprived
of the
negative
repercussions of such heinous
crimes
. If
movie
makers produce such kind of
movies
, then they should be
penalised
with heavy taxes
so
that they will
think
twice
before
making it;
for instance
, the Swedish
Government
had imposed a 40 percent tax on such
movie
directors and
as a result
they don't produce these films,
eventually
the
crime
rate has diminished
considerably
in that country.
To encapsulate, a stringent
steps
should
be taken
by an administrators
so
that there would be
less
movies
related to
crimes
in
nesr
future and
teenagers
can have a peaceful life
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