Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree? v.10
Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. v. 10
Nowadays, media plays a vital role in daily activities. Children those who are watching media have a great impact on their activities. It has two sides of a coin.
Firstly, media are mainly used for communication that is possible through paper, television and the Internet. In earlier, newspapers are used for knowing the daily activities what will happen in and around the world, and it will take minimum one day to reach that news to the people. After that, television makes it simple by showing the people about the world in videos. Now, with the extensive use of the Internet, anything what will happen in the world will be displayed on screens within a fraction of seconds through the satellites.
Secondly, media covers a lot of news regarding sports, movies, politics and about celebrities. Celebrities are the people who are famous for their things. For example, Sachin Tendulkar is a celebrity, who is famous for cricket and is known as father of cricket. Media covers a lot of information about them like what they are doing, what is their style? , how they will take the stress and their daily activities. As a result, common people believe that they are heroes and their role models. In advertisements, celebrities will act to earn more money and they will do actions like drive the car with more speed, jumping from mountains, cycling in the rocks and flying like a spider man. In fact, they will not do all these really, they can be created by using graphics. Children observing that actions done by them and implementing them in their real lives, which causes serious life threatening problems. For instance, recently in Mumbai a young boy jumped from the balcony by watching an advertisement on television, in which his favourite star acted, thinking that he can also able to do that activity.
In conclusion, I strongly agree up to a certain extent. Famous people real and camera life, both are different. Children can take only inspired qualities from them and it is good if we admire their actions or roles and their hard work to become a star, but it is not good to practice some actions in real life.
Nowadays,
media
plays a vital role in daily
activities
. Children those who are watching
media
have a great impact on their
activities
. It has two sides of a coin.
Firstly
,
media
are
mainly
used
for communication
that is
possible through paper, television and the Internet. In earlier, newspapers are
used
for knowing the daily
activities
what will happen in and around the world, and it will take minimum one day to reach that news to the
people
. After that, television
makes
it simple by showing the
people
about the world in videos.
Now
, with the extensive
use
of the Internet, anything what will happen in the world will
be displayed
on screens within a fraction of seconds through the satellites.
Secondly
,
media
covers
a lot of
news regarding sports, movies, politics and about
celebrities
.
Celebrities
are the
people
who are
famous
for their things.
For example
,
Sachin
Tendulkar
is a
celebrity
, who is
famous
for cricket and
is known
as father of cricket.
Media
covers
a lot of
information about them like what they are doing, what is their style?
,
how they will take the
stress
and their daily
activities
.
As a result
, common
people
believe that they are heroes and their role models. In advertisements,
celebrities
will act to earn more
money and
they will do actions like drive the car with more speed, jumping from mountains, cycling in the rocks and flying like a spider
man
. In fact, they will not do all these
really
, they can
be created
by using graphics. Children observing that actions done by them and implementing them in their real
lives
, which causes serious life threatening problems.
For instance
, recently in Mumbai a young boy jumped from the balcony by watching an advertisement on television, in which his
favourite
star acted, thinking that he can
also
able to do that activity.
In conclusion
, I
strongly
agree
up to a certain extent.
Famous
people
real and camera life, both are
different
. Children can take
only
inspired qualities from them and it is
good
if we admire their actions or roles and their
hard
work to become a star,
but
it is not
good
to practice
some
actions in real life.
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