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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes. v.3

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes. v. 3
It is widely argued that foreign tourism has an adverse impact on host countries. There is a variety of reasons behind this opinion, and several solutions ought to be applied to change these oppositional attitudes. There are two important reasons why local residents often consider international tourism as a cause of serious problems in their country. One reason in that it may have a bad impact on traditional customs and indigenous practices because tourists may be not sensitive toward to local resident’s feeling. For example, Western tourists visiting to developing countries as Vietnam or Thailand may be rowdy or wear unsuitable clothing, which might have an undesirable influence on young local people who copy immodest or procovative behavior and fashions. Another reason is that tourists often pollute or litter beautiful spots and destroy famous preservation area. These situations cause the aggressive to local residents who live around these areas where day by day they see rubbishes throw everywhere, and the preservations are collapsing. Therefore, measures must be taken by government, tourism agencies, and foreign tourists to change these negative attitudes toward tourists. Firstly, government and travel companies should inform to tourist the concerns of local residents to them avoid these misunderstanding behaviors. Secondly, tourist agencies must enforce strict regulations on the tourism industry, ensure that local operators are responsible for clearing litter and disposal of waste in right ways that do not harm the environment. In conclusion, only by addressing the concerns of local people will negative attitudes to international tourism be changed.
It is
widely
argued that foreign
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tourism
has an adverse impact on host countries. There is a variety of
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reasons
behind this opinion, and several solutions ought to
be applied
to
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change
these oppositional attitudes.

There are two
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important
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reasons
why
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local
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residents
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often
consider international
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tourism
as a cause of serious problems in their country. One
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reason
in that it may have a
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bad
impact on traditional customs and indigenous practices
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because
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tourists
may be not sensitive toward to
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local
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resident’s
feeling.
For example
, Western
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tourists
visiting to
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developing countries
as Vietnam or Thailand may be rowdy or wear unsuitable clothing, which might have an undesirable influence on young
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local
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people
who copy immodest or
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procovative
behavior and fashions. Another
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reason
is that
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tourists
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often
pollute or litter
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beautiful
spots and
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destroy
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famous
preservation area. These situations cause the aggressive to
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local
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residents
who
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live
around these areas where day by day they
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see
rubbishes throw everywhere, and the preservations are collapsing.

Therefore
, measures
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must
be taken
by
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government
,
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tourism
agencies, and foreign
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tourists
to
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change
these
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negative
attitudes toward
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tourists
.
Firstly
,
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government
and travel
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companies
should inform to
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tourist
the concerns of
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local
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residents
to them avoid these misunderstanding behaviors.
Secondly
,
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tourist
agencies
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must
enforce strict regulations on the
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tourism
industry, ensure that
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local
operators are responsible for clearing litter and disposal of waste in right ways that do not harm the environment.

In conclusion
,
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only
by addressing the concerns of
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local
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people
will
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negative
attitudes to international
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tourism
be
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changed
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
A foreign language is like a frail, delicate muscle. If you do not use it, it weakens.
Jhumpa Lahiri

IELTS essay Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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