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Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. v. 4
A part of every country growth depends upon the import and export of goods between them. Some people have an opinion that every country must keep all the food consumption for their people welfare because import has to be at a minimal proportion. In my opinion, there are several benefits why import is significant also proper food needed to be import ahead too. Import is essential for countries and it would signify various reasons why it is necessary. Firstly, after keeping the appropriate option for their own country, it is required to import the leftover, which will be an income for local farmers. Product prices will increase if imported food has reduced and it results in no profit. Secondly, weather and soil conditions of all the countries are not similar. If any country is wealthy in the producing particular foods option comparatively more than another country, where no such crop is found than import could be done to balance it. For example, India is rich in the production of wheat, rice and spices, since other countries have no production of these products, then it is beneficial to import from those countries. Lastly, every country will not enrich in farming techniques, but they could specialize in manufacturing and industrialization. Hence, the import within the countries and balance the consumption of goods equally. On the other hand, it is not always necessary that imported products will be of upgraded quality also the food is imported from long distances. Therefore, it could degrade and in some cases, even, chemicals are used to keep them. In conclusion, it is essential for a country growth to do an import of food. Keeping the extra foods can result in wastage and loss in income for farmers as well as to make a relation with other countries import is vital. Import between different countries can create useful links and raise the growth of an economy.
A part of every
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country
growth depends upon the
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import
and export of
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goods
between them.
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Some
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people
have an opinion that every
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country
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must
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keep
all the
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food
consumption for their
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people
welfare
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because
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import
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has to
be at a minimal proportion. In my opinion, there are several benefits why
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import
is significant
also
proper
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food
needed to be
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import
ahead too.

Import is essential for
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countries
and it would signify various reasons why it is necessary.
Firstly
, after keeping the appropriate option for their
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own
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country
, it
is required
to
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import
the leftover, which will be an income for local farmers. Product prices will increase if imported
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food
has
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reduced
and it results in no profit.
Secondly
, weather and soil conditions of all the
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countries
are not similar. If any
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country
is wealthy in the producing particular
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foods
option
comparatively
more than another
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country
, where no such crop
is found
than
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import
could
be done
to balance it.
For example
, India is rich in the production of wheat, rice and spices, since other
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countries
have no production of these products, then it is beneficial to
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import
from those
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countries
.
Lastly
, every
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country
will not enrich in farming techniques,
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but
they could specialize in manufacturing and industrialization.
Hence
, the
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import
within the
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countries
and balance the consumption of
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goods
equally
.

On the other hand
, it is not always necessary that imported products will be of upgraded quality
also
the
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food
is imported
from long distances.
Therefore
, it could degrade and in
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some
cases, even, chemicals are
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used
to
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keep
them.

In conclusion
, it is essential for a
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country
growth to do an
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import
of
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food
. Keeping the extra
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foods
can result in wastage and loss in income for farmers
as well
as to
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make
a relation with other
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countries
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import
is vital.
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Import
between
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different
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countries
can create useful links and raise the growth of an economy.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
6.0
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