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Some people consider online education better than classroom studies. While others think classroom study is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion and examples. v.2

Some people consider online education better than classroom studies. While others think classroom study is better. v. 2
Over recent years, there have been enormous teaching methodologies introduced. People have different beliefs for distance learning and classroom learning, and that has become the topic of debate. However, I believe online education have begun the revolution in the teaching styles that students can reach from any part of the world. Various reasons for online learning are getting popular. Firstly, It is the most convenient way of study from home for which they need only a computer or laptop to make a peer-to-peer connection with university online resources as well as with the group of friends. For example, today there are many courses available online, which provides all the study material online as well as students can get access to videos uploaded by professional tutors. Moreover, pupils can upload their assignments online eliminating the process of physical exams. Secondly, online learning is inexpensive, so every student gets a chance to gain an education. For example, there are various sites, blogs, as well as videos with valuable information are available free of charge. On the other hand, various reasons that other teaching methods cannot replace physical education. First and foremost, the pupil can learn in the environment, where they are getting a physical appearance in front of them also they get motivated and pay full attention during the lecturer. Moreover, if they have any questions, they have an opportunity to ask their teacher straight away. In conclusion, on teaching practices, many people have different viewpoints. However, I believe that online education easily accessible with many benefits even for all those students who are not able to join campus and cannot spend huge money on education.
Over recent years, there have been enormous
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teaching
methodologies introduced.
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have
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different
beliefs for distance
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learning
and classroom
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learning
, and that has become the topic of debate.
However
, I believe
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online
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education
have begun the revolution in the
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teaching
styles that
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students
can reach from any part of the world.

Various reasons for
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online
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learning
are getting popular.
Firstly
, It is the most convenient way of study from home for which they need
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only
a computer or laptop to
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make
a peer-to-peer connection with university
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online
resources
as well
as with the group of friends.
For example
,
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today
there are
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many
courses available
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online
, which provides all the study material
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online
as well
as
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students
can
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get
access to videos uploaded by professional tutors.
Moreover
, pupils can upload their assignments
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online
eliminating the process of physical exams.
Secondly
,
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online
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learning
is inexpensive,
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so
every
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student
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gets
a chance to gain an
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education
.
For example
, there are various sites, blogs,
as well
as videos with valuable information are available free of charge.

On the other hand
, various reasons that other
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teaching
methods cannot replace physical
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education
.
First
and foremost, the pupil can learn in the environment, where they are getting a physical appearance in front of them
also
they
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get
motivated and pay full attention during the lecturer.
Moreover
, if they have any questions, they have an opportunity to ask their teacher straight away.

In conclusion
, on
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teaching
practices,
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many
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people
have
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different
viewpoints.
However
, I believe that
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online
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education
easily
accessible with
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many
benefits even for all those
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students
who are not able to
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join
campus and cannot spend huge money on
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education
.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people consider online education better than classroom studies. While others think classroom study is better. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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