Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality continuously, students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on teachers. Others think the respect and discipline in the classroom will disappear. Which opinion do you prefer? v.1

Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality continuously, students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on teachers. Others think the respect and discipline in the classroom will disappear. Which opinion do you prefer? v. 1
It is argued whether supporting high school students in assessing their teachers in the pursuit of improving educational quality would result in disrespect and indiscipline in the classroom. I agree that evaluation of teachers of secondary school students will improve the standard of education without any loss of control and respect in the classroom. Firstly, I will discuss why adolescent students should gauge their teachers and secondly, discuss why gauging teachers would not render any loss of ethical values within the academic setting. To begin with, pupil evaluation of teachers provides them with feedback on improving their teaching methodologies to increase student participation. This will further invoke the lecturer to refine ways to captivate the student’s attention. Increased participation will help the student in scoring better grades. For example, a famous school in Bangladesh named Scholastica significantly improved the performance of their students in the classroom when teachers came to know about their struggles through the teacher feedback system. Furthermore, I personally believe that criticism of teachers will not provoke any kind of disrespectful or undisciplined behaviours in students to thrive in the classroom, but it would rather nourish mutual understanding by identifying their special needs. This would provide, especially the underachieving students, a chance to express their problems in comprehending lectures and establish rapport. For instance, a study demonstrates that when underscoring students give comments to their teacher, the teacher would pay more attention to their academic setbacks and help them improve their weaknesses. In conclusion, assessment of teachers by students not only helps tune teaching techniques, but also promotes mutual understanding among lecturers and pupils. Therefore, I side with the opinion that this approach ultimately improves the quality of education without leading to disrespect and indiscipline in the classroom.
It
is argued
whether supporting high school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
in assessing their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
in the pursuit of improving educational quality would result in disrespect and indiscipline in the classroom. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that evaluation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
of secondary school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the standard of education without any loss of control and respect in the classroom.
Firstly
, I will discuss why adolescent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
should gauge their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
and
secondly
, discuss why gauging
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
would not render any loss of ethical values within the academic setting.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, pupil evaluation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
provides them with feedback on improving their teaching methodologies to increase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
participation. This will
further
invoke the lecturer to refine ways to captivate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student’s
attention. Increased participation will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
in scoring better grades.
For example
, a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
school in Bangladesh named
Possible spelling mistake found.
Scholastica
significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
the performance of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
in the classroom when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
came to know about their struggles through the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
feedback system.

Furthermore
, I
personally
believe that criticism of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
will not provoke any kind of disrespectful or undisciplined
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviours' is British English.
behaviours
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to thrive in the classroom,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it would
rather
nourish mutual understanding by identifying their special needs. This would provide,
especially
the underachieving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
, a chance to express their problems in comprehending lectures and establish rapport.
For instance
, a study demonstrates that when underscoring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
give comments to their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
would pay more attention to their academic setbacks and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their weaknesses.

In conclusion
, assessment of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
tune teaching techniques,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
promotes mutual understanding among lecturers and pupils.
Therefore
, I side with the opinion that this approach
ultimately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
the quality of education without leading to disrespect and indiscipline in the classroom.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality continuously, students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on teachers. Others think the respect and discipline in the classroom will disappear. Which opinion do you prefer? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts