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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old building? Should history stand in the way of progress? v.3

Dignity of a country. Few people opine that old building should be replaced by the new building. I believe that preserving ones historical monuments is essential in order to maintain pride of a nation and it also signifies the importance of medieval period. This essay would discuss ample of benefits of protecting ancient blocks and some of its effects on the way of progress. To begin with, identity of a nation is known from its untold tales of past. For example, old monuments, churches and temples signify a nation’s culture which should be taken care. To add on, there are number of historical buildings all over the world which is visited by the tourist due to its cultural heritage and mesmerizing beauty. Thus, preserving ancient monuments is important for a nation’s identity and serving as background information for the people of the society. However, there are few individuals who think that old buildings must be demolished and replaced by new one. In fact, it would not only give a particular monument a new look but also attract many people from all over the world to come and visit a country. To exemplify, with better infrastructure and design of latest times would preserve it for a longer period of time without losing its originality. Moreover, it would also mean that the country stimulates growth and fund is raised for the government in huge amount through international exposure. Hence, replacement of old monuments with new touch would confer in the progress of a society. To recapitulate, although replacing old buildings with new can be beneficial to the nation but on the other hand, I believe that preservation of ancient monuments is most important to inform people how country use to be in the past period.
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. Few
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old
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building
should
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new
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building
. I believe that preserving ones historical
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monuments
is essential in order to maintain pride of a
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nation
and it
also
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some
of its effects on the way of progress.

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begin
with, identity of a
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nation
is known
from its untold tales of past.
For example
,
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old
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monuments
, churches and temples signify a
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nation’s
culture which should
be taken
care. To
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add
on, there are number of historical
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buildings
all over the world which
is visited
by the tourist due to its cultural heritage and mesmerizing beauty.
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, preserving ancient
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monuments
is
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important
for a
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nation’s
identity and serving as background information for the
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people
of the society.

However
, there are few individuals who
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buildings
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must
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people
from all over the world to
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come
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country
. To exemplify, with better infrastructure and design of
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latest
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country
stimulates growth and fund
is raised
for the
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government
in huge amount through international exposure.
Hence
, replacement of
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old
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monuments
with
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new
touch would confer in the progress of a society.

To recapitulate, although replacing
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old
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buildings
with
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new
can be beneficial to the
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nation
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but
on the other hand
, I believe that preservation of ancient
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monuments
is most
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important
to inform
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people
how
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country
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IELTS essay Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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