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Many management interviews are based around assessing not only a person’s level of experience and knowledge but also their personality. Is leadership an innate skill? What other characteristics do companies look for in a manager? v.3

Many management interviews are based around assessing not only a person’s level of experience and knowledge but also their personality. Is leadership an innate skill? What other characteristics do companies look for in a manager? v. 3
A good leader must possess multiple qualities. For this reason, most of the companies need managers with qualities such as good personality, knowledge and experience in their work. Leadership is an acquired skill and heredity can help a person acquire this skill. Firstly, leadership is one of the most important qualities for any managerial role. People who believe it is an innate skill, give reasons that a person needs to be optimistic and jovial and both these qualities are inherited. However, a person can be a good leader only if one is trusted and respected by team members. It takes effort from the manager, to gain the trust and respect. Hence, it is not just an innate quality, but an acquired one as well. For instance, most of the people feel comfortable in working with a chief who is trustworthy and optimistic. There are quite a few other qualities that companies look for in anyone with managerial role. Managers must have good communication skills because they need to communicate with the clients and the team members. It is a must to establish a good rapport on both parties to run a project smoothly. For instance, if someone has good relations with a client, then he/she will be able to convince them with the soft skills about the minor delay in the delivery of the project. They need to be as transparent as possible, so that they can set a good example for their teammates in terms of professionalism, dedication etc. They must possess good time management skills. This factor ensures the client of the timely deliveries without putting pressure on the in house teammates. To conclude, leadership is both innate and acquired in nature. Other than knowledge, personality etc. , companies believe, managers must have qualities of soft skills, time management, transparency, optimism etc.
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companies
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managers
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personality, knowledge and experience in their work. Leadership is an acquired
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a person acquire this
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Firstly
, leadership is one of the most
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qualities
for any managerial role.
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who believe it is an innate
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skill
, give reasons that a person
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needs
to be optimistic and jovial and both these
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qualities
are inherited
.
However
, a person can be a
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good
leader
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only
if one
is trusted
and respected by team members. It takes effort from the
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manager
, to gain the trust and respect.
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, it is not
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an innate
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quality
,
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an acquired one
as well
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, most of the
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people
feel comfortable in working with a chief who is trustworthy and optimistic.

There are quite a few other
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qualities
that
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companies
look for in anyone with managerial role.
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Managers
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communication
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skills
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they
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to communicate with the clients and the team members. It is a
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must to
establish a
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rapport on both parties to run a project
smoothly
.
For instance
, if someone has
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good
relations with a client, then he/she will be able to convince them with the soft
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skills
about the minor delay in the delivery of the project. They
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need
to be as transparent as possible,
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so
that they can set a
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good
example for their teammates in terms of professionalism, dedication etc. They
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must
possess
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good
time management
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skills
. This factor ensures the client of the timely deliveries without putting pressure on the in
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house
teammates.

To conclude
, leadership is both innate and acquired in nature. Other than knowledge, personality etc.
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companies
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managers
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qualities
of soft
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skills
, time management, transparency, optimism etc.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Many management interviews are based around assessing not only a person’s level of experience and knowledge but also their personality. Is leadership an innate skill? What other characteristics do companies look for in a manager? v. 3

Essay
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4 paragraphs
304 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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