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Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Has it brought more advantages than disadvantages? v.2

Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Has it brought more advantages than disadvantages? v. 2
In the past, people used to do daily activities on their own, as the time changed the way of living also changed, now a days we are using electronic equipments like washing machine, hand-held mixer, vacuum cleaner e. t. c. By using these we can save time and do some productive work. Every coin has two faces,
In the past,
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people
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used
to do daily activities on their
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own
, as the time
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changed
the way of living
also
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changed
,
Did you mean "nowadays"?
now a days
we are using electronic equipments like washing machine, hand-held mixer, vacuum cleaner e. t. c. By using these we can save time and do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
productive work. Every coin has two faces,
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Has it brought more advantages than disadvantages? v. 2

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
57 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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