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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.10

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. v. 10
Nowadays, economy has been taken the important role of the progression of each country. Someone claims that other kinds are as same essential as recession for push countries forward. I completely agree that money is used to propel nations trading to develop various segments of countries which I will explain in this essay. There are several schemes and duties which need money for their foundations. For example, to improve education systems, a government should provide funding for creating effective teachers. Moreover, money may be used for building a better quality of school or university. Therefore, economy is the origin and invest in other projects. A government should think beginning of how making a large amount of income and then divide profits to other plans. However, I do appreciate the opposite view. A rustic cannot move forward only economy. They have to take an action into other aspects during expanding economy. For instance, public transportation, sports, environmental resources and so on, which are all basic needs of populations. Nevertheless, these can be moved on without spending costly. In conclusion, the economy is the significant section to drive the progression of the country. A country council should consider how to gain profit and suitable divide it into other parts of ministries. After having an investment, they can develop more in other types of important schemes.
Nowadays,
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economy
has
been taken
the
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important
role of the progression of each
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country
. Someone claims that
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other
kinds are as same essential as recession for push
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countries
forward. I completely
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agree
that money is
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used
to propel nations trading to develop various segments of
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countries
which I will
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explain
in this essay.

There are several schemes and duties which need money for their foundations.
For example
, to
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improve
education systems, a
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government
should provide funding for creating effective teachers.
Moreover
, money may be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for building a better quality of school or university.
Therefore
,
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economy
is the origin and invest in
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other
projects. A
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should
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think
beginning of how making a large amount of income and then divide profits to
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other
plans.

However
, I do appreciate the opposite view. A rustic cannot
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move
forward
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only
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economy
. They
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have to
take an action into
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other
aspects during expanding
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economy
.
For instance
, public transportation, sports, environmental resources and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on, which are all basic needs of populations.
Nevertheless
, these can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
on without spending costly.

In conclusion
, the
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economy
is the significant section to drive the progression of the
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country
. A
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country
council should consider how to gain profit and suitable divide it into
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
parts of ministries. After having an investment, they can develop more in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
types of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
schemes.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
223 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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