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Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why? v.2

Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why? v. 2
Watching movie or reading book? This is a controversial question between people who want to fill their free times. Some people inclined to watching movies, while there is a group of people that have a penchant for reading books, and each of these has many proofs for themselves. Regarding this, there are many film producer making movies based on books. In this case, although some people prefer to watch movies before reading books, I have a different point of view. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to read books completely at first. There are numerous reasons for this, two of which - that is - more details in the book, and not manipulated story, are the most outstanding ones. To begin with, the most striking reason why I prefer to read books before watching movies is the fact that books not limited to time and authors can relate the story with more details. Filmmakers have to relate their story in a limited time, two or maximum three hours, while time is not a limitation for authors, and they can write their story in a book with thousands of pages or even in 2 or 3 volume. Therefore filmmakers should neglect many details, while author by enjoying their innovative mind and imagination tools can tell more details about the story and bring their readers into the role of story’s characters. For example, I remember many years ago, when I read one of the J. K Rowling’s book, in the series of Harry Potter, a movie was produced based on this story. I watched that movie but I was so disappointed because the movie had little details and could not attract me. Another equally important point is that film procedures sometimes change the story based on their desire or some limitation. For instance, I remember a series that would be produced based on a historical story. Unfortunately, among the production, one of the performers who has a significant role in the movie decides to cut her contribution with the group. So procedure had to change the story of the movie until he could found new performers. In my opinion, these changes can ruin whatever author wants to tell in the story. On the other hand, all the characters of a book are available to authors, so he or she can relate the story whatever wants. All in all, with all this taken in to account, although some people are attracted by movies, since authors are more capable to write a story than filmmakers, I prefer to read the original story with the all details that author wants to tell instead of manipulated one.
Watching
movie
or reading
book
? This is a controversial question between
people
who want to fill their free
times
.
Some
people
inclined to watching
movies
, while there is a group of
people
that have a penchant for reading
books
, and each of these has
many
proofs for themselves. Regarding this, there are
many
film producer making
movies
based on
books
.
In this case
, although
some
people
prefer
to
watch
movies
before
reading
books
, I have a
different
point of view. As far as I
am concerned
, I
prefer
to
read
books
completely at
first
. There are numerous reasons for this, two of which
-
that is
-
more
details
in the
book
, and not manipulated
story
, are the most outstanding ones.

To
begin
with, the most striking reason why I
prefer
to
read
books
before
watching
movies
is the fact that
books
not limited to
time
and
authors
can relate the
story
with more
details
. Filmmakers
have to
relate their
story
in a limited
time
, two or maximum three hours, while
time
is not a limitation for
authors
, and they can write their
story
in a
book
with thousands of pages or even in 2 or 3 volume.
Therefore
filmmakers should neglect
many
details
, while
author
by enjoying their innovative mind and imagination tools can
tell
more
details
about the
story
and bring their readers into the role of
story’s
characters.
For example
, I remember
many
years ago, when I
read
one of the J. K Rowling’s
book
, in the series of Harry Potter, a
movie
was produced
based on this
story
. I
watched
that
movie
but
I was
so
disappointed
because
the
movie
had
little
details
and could not attract me.

Another
equally
important
point is that film procedures
sometimes
change
the
story
based on their desire or
some
limitation.
For instance
, I remember a series that would
be produced
based on a historical
story
. Unfortunately, among the production, one of the performers who
has
a significant role in the
movie
decides to
cut
her contribution with the group.
So
procedure had to
change
the
story
of the
movie
until he could
found
new performers. In my opinion, these
changes
can ruin whatever
author
wants to
tell
in the
story
.
On the other hand
, all the characters of a
book
are available to
authors
,
so
he or she can relate the
story
whatever wants.

All in all, with all this taken in to account, although
some
people
are attracted
by
movies
, since
authors
are more capable to write a
story
than filmmakers, I
prefer
to
read
the original
story
with the all
details
that
author
wants to
tell
instead
of manipulated one.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
66Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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Rita Mae Brown

IELTS essay Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
443 words
5.5
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